Okay, that 'cute' before was just for the first chapter; I had no idea there was more until I read the other reviews...so used to the little one-offs :)

The last two aren't remotely cute, but they are just as great. I do love that moment in the movie

Tres cute :)

This was a wonderful back door way of having Wash be truthsome and for Mal's own good. Nice job!

Oh. Finally getting around to this one (I have catching up to do). Very, very nice. Chapter 3 rounds it right out.

Very powerful story... but it only starts to make sense after chapter 2. Nice writing!

WOW! How passionate. It was very VERY confusing when I started. I didn't see the "Tell that to Inara" line at first and then I didn't know why Wash was talking about Kaylee. But see then I went ahead to chpt. 2 and after reading Zoe and re-reading Wash I finally understood and LOVED IT. Thank you. Mal was the best though-the far best and most wonderful.

Cheers (and thanks) Jen