very good story

tear jerker T.T ... great version/spin on it ~ nicely written too .

And now Kate dies. Boo hoo... ; ( I think that it would have been better if this actually happened. The relationship in NCIS is horribly unbalanced and any attempts at rectifing it are being blithely ignored, (I.e. Dog Tags) its astouding how they completely disregard McGee. Im still waiting for the episode where Tim buggers out of NCIS and lands himself some mighty post in Pentagon or somewhere. Though i fear that with 12 seasons its already too late :( Thanks for writing this ;) P.S. if you know some good whump/satisfaction/friendship McGee stories I would appreciate it if you let me know, thanks :)

This story would have been much better if you could have just kept Abby out of there. I hate her possessiveness. My Timmy -such a load of BS - especially after the horrible way she treats him.

Timothy is not, never has been and never WILL be - HER anything.

Very interesting concept - now what didn't I think of this?

neat

:)

like it

Nice.

Really cool story! I particularly love the small changes you made like Gibbs having to explain why Tim would not die. Because while they are both awesome characters, Tim is not Tony. :)

Thanks for writing and posting!

I love alternate timeline stories and this one is very good. I think I would have let him die though. Not that I don't like McGee. He's my second favorite after Abby, but since this is fanfic and not the real show why not?

It would also be interesting to do a version of this tory for each of the characters. What if it was Gibbs, Abby or Kate? Not to mention pairs or heck all of them get it and they die one by one. I know. I'm evil.

i love it.

i almost had a heart attack when Timmys heart stopped but really good story.i think yu described his sister well which explains why he gets along with Abby so well and you got his parents perfectly

i loved this story. but why mcgee why couldn't it have been abby

I was on leave for the best part of a week and now I have got masses of fic updates to catch up on, as I do not have any kind of internet access at home, just this at work.

"“Hey Sarah! You just let me know if you want to cry into my shoulder again Ok? I’m going to need a new shirt.” Tony held his arms out and indicated his very expensive, stylish and currently extremely rumpled shirt he was wearing. Sarah simply laughed and punched him in the shoulder as she left. Tony made an ‘ow’ face and rubbed his sore shoulder before turning back to McGee. “Hell of right hook your sis has there Probie”" - Yeah, DiNozzo, and her uber-cute big brother whom you are always taking the mickey out of taught her that right hook, just you remember that!

The rest of that scene, until my boy McGee gasps that Sarah is too good for diNozzo, is JUST SO CUTE!

"I hope you enjoyed. Please let me know if you did. Precious)" - Enjoyed I did. OT question: Is your author name Precious Pup because you are a committed dog person who has one (a precious pup)? Or is it a nickname of some US sports team that you maybe support, which I won't understand at all, since I am not an American?