While there were some descriptions (and even dialogue) that were ultimately superfluous and detracted from any believable naturalness in a given scene, this was still a pleasant read.
The subtlety in some of the responses was lovely and intriguing, while the view for the readers watching it all play out was intriguing.

Thank you for sharing your tale, and I wish you well with your continued writing endeavors~

What a nice story!

Great story!

This was really cute, poor grumpy old Jareth.

I really enjoyed your story. It was nice and sweet, very well planned and well written. I guess that I Like how much it seems like professional writing. Also the dialog you use is perfect. It's interesting and new, it also seems like dialog that these characters might actually say.

That... Sigh... That was simply beautiful. Perfection. I love it. I truly do. 3 no star for you, you get a heart. :3 ...beautiful

What a great read!

Absolutely charming. Poor Jareth, just wanting someone special around. And now he's got the someone he wants. Will keep an eye out for more by you. Thanks for the delightful read.

{claps} Wonderful

LOL! Cute. ,'

Awesome job!

~Xela

Very cute! I love their exchange at the end!

~Mich

Okay I loved this one shot some much that I want it to be turned in to a full story . Is that in the books maybe ? Please !

oh ho ho, so clever you are jareth. "but perhaps one day...if you keep wishing, you'll catch up." I do believe that is a challenge X3

Wonderful! Love the idea that she was picking up on his emotions, across the void, so to speak. well done.