Reviews for Thinly Veiled Illusion
moosejuice5 chapter 13 . 1/22/2015
1. You said their was 50 agents, I doubt very much that one grenade would get even 10 of them.
2. It's shown twice that Claire's regeneration ability is able to recover from a point blank nuclear explosion, a grenade really wouldn't be able to kill somebody with it.
3. Great fic, up until this point I loved it.
emmaleewhittaker chapter 14 . 12/1/2014
OMG beautiful story I loved it
Kitana Mayo chapter 14 . 6/9/2014
why did you kill him off I love your story very well written but you didn't have to kill him
Guest chapter 14 . 9/26/2013
Fantastic story. I was sad that Gabriel had to die, but it was necessary. I cried. It was that spectacular of a fic. Keep writing fantastic fics!
hiddlesquinto chapter 14 . 9/13/2013
omg this fic made me cry so much... I love it so much it is the best one I have read in a while.
Guest chapter 14 . 3/10/2013
The first time I read this I sobbed, and this time I cried even harder. I JUST CAN'T OKAY. I CAN'T.
SusanMarieS chapter 14 . 5/22/2011
totally made me cry. thank you very much for the story.
Misfitable chapter 14 . 11/26/2010
*sniff* *sniff* But why did Sylar have to die?
kissngoodbye chapter 14 . 6/30/2010
that was so sad T.T really loved your plot throughout, it was stunning XD love syclair pair!

but omggg how could he die T.T thought he had her power wont die T.T could you do an alternate ending or some sort? hehehes XD
demonicmoon815 chapter 14 . 11/21/2009
Absolutely the best Sylar and Claire fanfic I've ever read.

Please don't stop ]
BackwardBlossom chapter 14 . 10/16/2009
Perfect, but sad ending! Awesome story!
Christinie chapter 14 . 6/6/2009
no!I though Sylar is going to come back!
synjax chapter 14 . 6/1/2009
B-b...b-but...Sylar can't die! Wait...correct me if I'm wrong, but Sylar took Claire ability in this fic...right? or didn't he?

~I'M CRYING OVER HERE! YOU ARE TOTALLY-TRULY-AWESOMELY-ROCKIN'-COOL!

~KEEP UP THE ROCKIN' JOB!
synjax chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Aw man...Lyle died...( and Claire's been crying and crying...and, oh my gosh, $250,0? wow...they ARE Petrellis anyway...

~KEEP UP THE T.T.A.R.C. JOB!
lordoftheringsfanficreader chapter 14 . 5/2/2009
Aw... I want to cry. But that was easily the best ending I've read for ANY Heroes fanfic, not just Sylar/Claire ones. Great writing all the way through... keep up the wonderful work! _

-lordoftheringsfanficreader
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