Ooh, spooky! Nicely done

Wait, half the characters were ghosts? This must be an inside joke or something... Actually, when they mentioned the old man had gone back to "his box," I thought you were insinuating a Doctor Who crossover. Anyway, decent story. There were some spelling and grammatical errors from time to time that took me out of it a little - you might want to proof it again - but I liked the characterization of it and the description of the environment, the sunrise and stuff, was nice. I liked your inclusion of the other patients, and how they added to Ed's thoughts - REALLY sad about the mom and her kid, though. When you named the baby Trisha I literally gasped.

Pretty good. I liked most of Ed's introspection, and it was very nice the way you juggled back and forth between the present and the past. I thought the nurses were a bit much - more annoying than I'd expect real nurses/people to be, and I'm not exactly sure what the old guy was supposed to signify, since he didn't really say much, but for the most part this was good writing and good characterization. I really liked the metaphor of shattered glass, all mixed up and how things wouldn't be the same if Mustang died. I also kind of like how you described Ed almost yelling about how he didn't want a father, the way the words came to him, on his tongue, but didn't come out...

I'm so sorry that I didn't review Hospital Gossip when I first read it, which was a few months ago. I just couldn't think of the right words to say that described my feelings of this story. This story is so amazing. I loved how you portrayed Edward's feelings about the whole situation. I really loved the parental royxed relationship that's going on in this story. Once again I am very sorry.

I really liked this story! - Good work, quite a few unexpected twists

That was amazing. I loved it. :)

Oh, wow. Still, how interesting!

That ending was great!

Aww, that was sweet.

Yay! That was an awesome ending! Loved it!

(and I wish I could give you beautiful fanart, but frankly...I'm horrible at art T.T)

i may try to do some fanart for you, but the attempt will wait until after Christmas...

anyway, i love it! definitely very interesting, especially these little clues about Emily. going back over the fic again i notice it more. you did a fantastic job on this! thank you so much to writing it! XD

cute!very awesome as usual my dear SecretSnow.

keep it up~

Whoa...it's like the whole story was a dream. Awesome job!

I WOULD LOVE TO DO YOUR FANART STUFF! But...I have no deviantart account. If my parents will let me get one, then I shall try and get drawings up for this story.

I love the chapter and RUN ED! THE NURSES MAY BE AFTER YOU! D Update when you can and ~all I want for christmas is a deviantart account~!

Aw... Poor Roy and Ed. I feel bad for them even if they are not real. What you have just put in as a story is actually like the real world. It is sad and omg I thought I was going to cry. Update when you can cuz this story is great.