Sooo sweet ! That was Perfect, thank y ou !

Enjoyable. Thank you for writing

I like hearing Angela over all of the other awful thoughts Edward heard. It wasn't all of them but, Bella was right about them thinking she was probably pregnant.
I like it when Bella is more reasonable.

i love this story so much, it is such a great idea!

I think you captured the characters quite well. Good story over all.

Sweet story :) I really like it.

cuuuuuuuute

"I grasped his hand and shook it. With only a bit more pressure, I could reduce it to a bloody, mangled pulp. But that would be very wrong. Calm and friendly, I reminded myself. I forced myself to release his hand." Again, this is too funny. This was adorable. One of my favs.

Awwwwwwwwww, that was so sweet! I love the way you end your stories! This was really cute :) I'd write more in the review, but I'm kind of interested in reading some of your other fanfics. Bye!

I LUV IT I LUV IT I LUV IT!

this is so freaking adorable! :)

Well, at the beginning of Breaking Dawn" she has lost her truck (which she loved) and is driving a car that is quite an attention getter. Her father is making a BIG deal of Jake being "missing," when she knows a lot about it that she can't tell Charlie. Charlie is putting pressure on her about she is not helping to find him. I think she is happy about the wedding, but Alice is making it bigger than she wanted, so her stress factor is very high.

i like it a lot. really. but i wish there was more drama, because i love drama so much. the students more evil, and being mean and furious. nehnehneh i know, i'm evil.
i really enjoyed reading this. thanks

great story!

It was an accurate take on the students there. I think you did great with the comments, and the end works too.