Reviews for His Daughter
Haphne Emeraldplains chapter 33 . 6/22
Any chance of an update?
nintamara chapter 33 . 3/1
Lovely story. I’m looking forward to your next update. I’m sorry that things have been rough for you, i hope they get better. I felt so sad for Zatora, Fredy and Matthew gone in such a short span of time.
rothfriedrich2 chapter 33 . 1/29
The Storry ist great. Please keep writing.
Are you going to writng about the time direktly after the Battle ?
I am not throwing away my shot chapter 33 . 12/22/2019
This story is amazing! Keep up the great work! :)
XxDragon King DragneelxX chapter 33 . 12/16/2019
Omg you r pure evil leaving us all hanging on this chapter! I gotsss to know what happens here! This fic started slow but man after chapter 21 I couldn't put this down I just had to keep reading! Really enjoying this and I can't wait for the next chapter!
XxDragon King DragneelxX chapter 32 . 12/16/2019
Wow shut didn't see that coming at the e d or the part in the middle! Absolutely brilliant chapter!
Vanilla chapter 9 . 12/16/2019
I hate it when authors make eleven yearl-olds behave like hormonal teens.
XxDragon King DragneelxX chapter 18 . 12/16/2019
When will she get with Harry?
Nanettez chapter 8 . 11/28/2019
If Zatora was born in 1979/80 Tom and his wife would have been over 50 when she was born. I was expecting her to be one generation earlier. If Zatora was the name given by her mother it is no wonder Dumbledore knew who she was. I was hoping she would not be in Slytherin but no such luck. Seven years in that environment will not be good for her.
burtonfan422 chapter 33 . 11/27/2019
I always loved this part of Harry's story, the epic battles, the brave witches and wizards who went down fighting, I always wished I could be there too! I'm really sorry you had a really rough year, but I'm glad my reviews helped you out in finishing the chapter. I'm glad Zatora got to get back at the man who murdered her brother, and that she told him to rot in Azkaban, it was in perfect character. I am once again sorry you had to go through some rough times
Guest chapter 32 . 11/14/2019
Update?
burtonfan422 chapter 32 . 9/27/2019
Wow! Zatora had to watch Freddy and Matthew die (Greyback's a real creep/jerk!) Two more casualties in that war! I hope we can see more chapters soon, I really want to see more of Zatora's story. (Please don't tell me she's going to become Harry's love interest in this timeline, I really want it to stay Ginny, but that could be because I love the books so much)
burtonfan422 chapter 31 . 9/27/2019
Alright! The battle of Hogwarts! Fred and George came to Hogwarts pretty quickly (they're out of school by now, thought I'd point that out) and it's good that Zatora is reunited with her little brother and best friends! I like that Blaise became a double agent, and that was a good prank he pulled. Thank you for continuing the love story between Harry and Ginny and changing Harry's love interest
burtonfan422 chapter 30 . 9/18/2019
It seems a little convenient that Voldemort would put Zatora in that same Gringotts vault, just so she could meet up with the trio again, but I'm glad she's back with them and safe. I daresay Mr. Ollivander handcarved her an awesome wand! I like that she stood up for the Skrewts and how much she loves animals, that's why I like her as a character, I love animals too, even ones that seem people see as horrid.
burtonfan422 chapter 29 . 9/18/2019
Well Fenrir was a total creep, I'm actually glad Voldemort's going to teach him a lesson, Wormtail's death was the same, as it should have been. I just hope that once the war's over, things will look up for Zatora, but yeah, Malfoy grew up significantly
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