finish it nowwwwwwwwwwwww

please update as i am eager to know what happen with ryuho and the child during childbirth.. huhu.. i really am like th story you made from your imagination.. hope you continue

want some continuation.. i like the storyline.. please continue it

I normally do not review anymore, so I will make this short!

I am so glad you came back and wrote this! It was the cliffhanger that kept me wanting to read more and more. It was a bit short, but still good to keep the reader in suspense to what's going to happen or if Ryuho relies heavily on Tachibana or Kazuma.

Great job! Keep up the good work!

i loved it a lot and i hope you update sooooooooooooooooooooon

This is quite good, very descriptive. I don't know these characters and yet I find myself attached to them already. This story pulled me right in.

I'd love to see more.

This was written a year ago? You should update this! I want to see what happens to Ryohu and Kazuma!

Please?

This is really good!

o. i like. its pretty good so far. you got my hooked already. - keep up the good work!