Thanks for writing this, it was very sweet, and gave much needed insight to Maddie's thoughts and feelings.

Your story is a brilliant alternative to the "official" episode! I like every line you wrote: every word oozes sweetness.

It's a believable alternative version of the events we're familiar with, or better still... This is the way things should've worked out!

Besides, this story is fluent and enjoyable to read.

Hope to read more!

WOW what a great story! So i guess you are going to continue with every/almost every episode of season 4 maybe? Hope we wont have to wait too long for another episode! I so love that we still all have the want and need for these great F/F stories! Thanks for sharing!

This will be tons of fun! Obviously there were issues with the show for them to make the decisions they did for seasons 4 and 5, but it sure makes you wonder why now, 22 years later, there are writers such as your self that can go in a different direction with Maddie and David where the fans will be happy! And that is what the show is really about anyway...2 people who are destined to be happy...evetually! :)

Looking forward to more!

Great great! Thanks for giving us a glimpse of another road the writers could have taken...I especially like the playful bedroom scene. After all the reruns, the hiatuses, and the on-and off-screen drama, we fans sure deserved a scene like this where Maddie and David were happy together, however briefly. Can't wait to read more!