| Reviews for Hallow Wings |
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9VE chapter 1 . 4/25 Just to let you know, the first sentence has a spelling error. (bid-big) The story is great, I really enjoy it! Followed and faved. 3 |
ageise02 chapter 26 . 7/31/2012 LOVED the story ... Are you still planning the sequels to this story? I would be very eager for the next 2 parts to this story! |
ageise02 chapter 21 . 7/30/2012 I was sorry to read of your Grandfather's passing and I wanted to say how much I am enjoying your story |
Udumuhv chapter 12 . 12/9/2011 Amazing storyline! I simply love your story,Lexi is interesting and this side of Edward is enjoyable. One of my favourite stories because I can't stand original Bella. But why is it listed as Edward & Jacob story? I think that more people would find it and enjoy it, if this would be in some other a thought:) |
MaeveM262 chapter 23 . 8/11/2011 This was my face after reading this chapter :o |
MaeveM262 chapter 9 . 8/10/2011 Ooo, they did the dirty! And it was hot hot hot ;) |
MaeveM262 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011 I've read this story before but I decided to reread it and actually review a couple times :) I love Lexi shes an amazing OC and the first thing she says to Edward ("Goodness. Am I that fat? Probably the wings,") just cracked me up! I'm very glad that you wrote this Fic because it's one of my absolute favorites :D |
Nomannic chapter 9 . 1/29/2010 Finally. I like this side of Edward. I really do. But um... he didn't say I love you back. After fucking her. (pardon my french, but what else would you call that?). That's a little cruel. Ah, sorry, thought I'd review since I'm this far in the story. I do like it. It's intriguing. A little constructive criticism (don't read if you don't want it): Your sex needs a little more... Pace. Flow. Description words to soften it out. But that's all. This is great. I love it. |
GOwk chapter 22 . 12/28/2009 We are now two...I didn't finished Breaking Dawn neither after bella was changed it was getting to... Happy and cheesy and too many love. Great story :D |
lepetiterose chapter 1 . 12/25/2009 I love it so far! Lexi seems like a spicy angel (; on to the nex chapter! |
Berria chapter 23 . 12/8/2009 How did you know about Binghamton? Just curious, cause I'm from there. |
Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 26 . 11/25/2009 Love your story! |
Dragonsinger13 chapter 26 . 11/12/2009 WOW! Its been awhile. I have been really busy. I finally have some time on my hands to catch up on some reading... Anyway. This was a wonderful ending to a wonderful story! Great work my dear. I would always love reading a one-shot especially when you are the author. But if you don't want to write one then I'm good with that too. Okay its time for me to go and read your other stories! |
Amy chapter 26 . 10/24/2009 aw i loved it u did a good job hope u write a part 2 to this maybe like as there baby grows n there life that be cool |
Belysa chapter 26 . 10/24/2009 The story is good, I really like it but the ending just feels kinda of rushed. |