Geez. Diana, Clark, Lois, Alfred and Dick seem like such assholes in this story. Callously disregarding and even encouraging the rape of their friend

IF ANYBODY THINKS BATMAN IS A RIVAL TO SUPERMAN THAN THERE OUT OF THEIR FUCKING MIND. HES JUST HUMAN THAT USES GADGETS.

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Talia and Selina hears of this XD

So the guy gets both Diana and Maxima. After Damien, this is something else.

Why is Superman so weak and a pansy in this story? It's depressing. :(

Bats is in trouble now, isn't he.
That action scene kicked ass! I loved the descriptions, they were great!

Her eyes were fucking bleeding! How is that hot!? Maxima's fucking crazy. Lol, the laser eye sex scene actually hurt my eyes to read and think about. Not due to bad writing or anything like that, but the contrary. Ow, ow, ow. It feels like I've been staring at the sun. (Am I getting a headache too?)

PLEASE do an epilogue/sequel to this! I even have an idea of how it would go that would be just as funny as this.

Oh I'm... I am actually really disappointed that he was forced to do it anyways. And extremely disapproving of Diana and the dact that she clearly projected her own desires onto Bruce based on suppressed emotions. Diana, I don't know how things are done on Themyscira but in Man's World we don't force people to do things when they clearly have moral and physical reasons for avoiding them in the first place!
Kudos to Lois for taking charge like a champ and getting back her man in one relatively untouched piece!
Maxima is a crazy ho who needs to keep her libido in check. They have interstellar travel and unimaginably advanced technology and magics but no intergalactic version of eHarmony or craigslist?
"Hello there, peon, I am Maxima and I am looking for a mate of the highest standard who is not averse to the concept of fathering a child and never seeing that child ever again. I also enjoy long walks over the slain bodies of my enemies and drinking cool iced drinks under the sun."
10/10 good fic would rec :)

Got a little weirded/grossed out at the idea of Batman siring a child with this Maximus chick, but you ended the story well enough with some good camaraderie between Batman and Supes. Overall, not bad :)