Thanks for writing this, a beautiful, truly magical world and so multidimensional compared to the majority of J/S fics. And your characters had so much depth.

That was amazing world-building. I absolutely love your explanation of goblin types and how fae magic is so very different.
Also love Sarah stabilising Jareth because she can see multiple perspectives and walk many paths at once - I totally get why she’s confused why someone else can’t blend reality and fantasy - I worked at a fairy shop while studying science/engineering, some of the other fairies were in the army reserves and studied law/completed an electrician’s apprenticeship. So I am a firm believer that reality and fantasy should live side-by-side and mingle as much as possible!
Thanks for sharing

Wow really interesting. I liked the sympathetic take on Karen, and Sarah being self-aware. Felt quite sorry for Jareth suffering with his heart elsewhere.
Thanks for sharing

You have a gift and I desperately admire how you've worked to create this exceptional story! I enjoyed every moment of it!

Thank you. I'm glad you continued. It's interesting. I like that you add a little backstory. I find the Jereth perspective to give a bit in the way of why he's drawn to Sarah and how other. I admit I hate him a little less for perusing a minor when he had trouble even keeping within one timeline. I find Sarah's rejection of false dichotomies interesting. I find Karen's perspective touching. I do think that a date isn't the only thing a teenage girl might want time alone for. I do think it's an interesting way to view the Sarah Karen relationship, that would give logistical support and a little blind faith. Being a parent of a child who deals with magical kingdoms would be hard. It's a different take than quite a number. I think there are different akes on Fey, you chose one to add and contrast to Jereth and Sarah. Many stories Jereth is fey. Interesting difference in having him be a goblin as well as rule. It makes sense he sustains the labrinth. I take it as implied the food was from the endless plains as well as labyrinth. I also like how Sarah gets a new citizen and chooses the deal to be a gift for Jereth and allow a poet to explore an underused part of himself that he gave up. The giving up dreams to win labyrinth is sad.

Three points of view for this story, and I really liked it~~

Wow ;)

Oh, I loved this. Thank you!

I can't believe I found this again on accident! I have always really loved this story, thank you

That was sweet and I liked the way their relationship evened out over the years.

That was so perfect! I love the way she worked that out. It was especially nice since it was all from his POV.

That was an excellent start with a wonderful introduction to new lore and the tease of some great 'games'. I'm looking forward to where this goes.

Wow the progression of this tale is magnificent and enthralling. I did enjoy the various points of view.

I will simply say that I consider this story as an Masterpice.

I CANT BELIEVE YOU UPDATED! I come back to this story every year or two, and what an Amazing discovery! Thank you so much for updating! It would be churlish to ask for another, but we’re always interested in the Plains. What a gift!