uh oh. That doesn't sound too good. Hope Little Lumi is ok.

Yay! You updated! So... plan on doing so again?

Nice continuation! It will be interesting to see what will happen if Mace is forced to choose between Depa and Luminara.

WHY WONT YOU CONTINUE?

This is a good story, update please?

Continue. Continue soon. Sooner. NOW! I can't stand a story unfinished! Espeicialy this one...

You did it! You did it! I knew you would! I knew it! Okay... I have to calm down. I apologize. Unfortunatly, an outsider(my mom) won't let me join. At least, not yet. Keep your hopes up! Now, about the story...

You did great. I love the changes you made. I'm so glad you made them. I will read each and every one of your stories, beginning to end, over and over so I can see every change you made. Keep writing!

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

Good job! The banter between the two men was priceless, and I'm really want to see where you go with this.

Very good! Bravo! This is a story that must be read by all! By the way, I'm a Luminara fan too!

A great story. Very good.

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

OK, I like it so far. But Im very, very interested, what you plan for next chapter, which means: Update soon, please!

And I know Im little pedant about this: but Luminara herself said in The Cloak of Deception, that she grew up on her home planet (Im sure, how it is possible, but I know what I read)...And on Wookiepedia I cant find anything to confirm or refutate this...so, your point is just another...But I have to stopped pestering you, otherwise I may have some problems...:)

Interesting chapter to say the least. I can't help but wonder what is going to happen next. What dangers lurk around the corner. Please update soon!

Good job, Padawan!

Sorry, I just like posting reviews even though I was the one who betaed this. Sorry!

Just remember what I told you before, and you'll be fine.

-M