Hi! I really love your story, you're very talented. I'm French and I feel like I need to tell you that Jaime while it's the translation of "I love you" is never used as a nickname for little loved ones. In fact, it's simply never used as a nickname... Translated little loved one would be more among the lines of "mon petit amour". "J'aime" contains the first person pronoun equivalent of "I" so it would be pretty strange to use it that way. Nevertheless, I take really pleasure reading your stories. If you need anything about French wordings don't hesitate.

Okay, got to this chapter and realised, how old is Harry at this point? Apparently hes not 17 because he cant get his inheritance, but killed Voldy at 16, but has had 2 Voldy free birthdays, im a bit confused. Actually im really confused why im still reading this?

This has totally been plagerized.

I know this is an old story but all of your stories are amazing, but this one in particular actually made me cry. It was amazing! Great job

I was sure that someone had tel you : Jaime is not real french: J'aime yes J' for I and aime for love.
The furstname for Love is Aime or Aimée, it is a old old name. _
I like your story.
Thanks for your work.

Ha my is Cara actually so when I saw that I was like hell yea.

I think your definitely making lucius out to be really horrible than he should be. Also the fact that Harry is so very submissive I hate it. But it'd well written and a good story over all.

Good fic, I enjoyed reading it! :-)

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an interesting tale, very enjoyable to read

really intense but lovely finished story with a lot of plot twists.

I really want to hit them all for how they are treating Harry. I am crying for poor Harry and I hope that everything works out in the end.

Poor Harry it makes me feel like crying at what his so called friends and family did to him.

loved it! :)

Loved that chapter!