You're twenty-six now, then. Wherever have the years gone?

Wait, what? HE DUBS TOSHIRO? Nevermind not watching dub, I need to see that!

Please excuse my use of vulgar language buT fuCk yOu aLbuS yOu diCk oHhHh fuCk yoU, yOu piEcE of shiT a AWW I haTe yOu I actuALLy haTe yOu you soN oF a biTcH yOh fuCking AHhHhhHh-

I apologise for the language but amazing story author this is honestly so unique and just pure amazing plot wise etc.

This fanfics is pretty bad and most of the characters are completely OOC.
Overall I would give this a 2/6 , becouse it's not completely terrible, it has good grammar and the basic idea is ok but the chapters (especially Dumbledore) are just to OOC for me to continue

Dumbledore is really OOC in this chapter (and in this fic in general) I hate evil/manipulative Dumbledore and I hope Toshio's won't let him get away with that. I mean this Dumbledore is at least as bad a Voldemort maybe even umbitch levels of Evil. Why did you have to make Dumbledore Evil. I can understand Dumbledore seeing him as a thread and even trying to read his mind, but torture? Dumbledore would never use torture like that. He no better than umbitch
I hope Toshiro will kill him later and won't keep working for him.

Are you telling me that a shinigami captain in a gigai is as weak as a human ? wtf he's strugling against a single dementor, how weak is he for him to be blackmailed by freaking human even if they have magic he's litteraly a god of death and dementor are or should be a lesser version of hollow.
I can continue this story further it's just absurd

LOVE. BUT I DIDN'T GET WHY YOU MADE HARRY KINDA A ASS. I'M NOT YELLING; I JUST TYPE THIS WAY.

dammit. really wanted Dumbledore wiped out..

please tell me soul society is going to wipe Hogwarts and England off the map

I just finished the story and I just have to say that you are a freaking genius! I am completely in love with this story and it was just so well written that I just needed to add it to my favorites list. I've recently rediscovered my love for Toshiro Hitsugaya and I am cackling over the idea of him going to Hogwarts. The Dementor touch was really cool and made the story more immersive and gave a feeling of dread every time Toshiro was near them. (And thanks to you, I'll have the idea of a burning Dementor chasing me in my head. Thank you for that horrifying image.)

At first, I thought this was going to be a Dumbledore bashing fic, but you kept him pretty close to canon; the lives of his students come first before anything else. This is the same guy who begged Snape to kill him so that Malfoy wouldn't be forced to. His relationship with Toshiro was interesting and engaging to watch. Their final bit of banter before the year was completely over got a chuckle out of me.

Toshiro's relationship with Black was a little funny and Black kind of kept me on edge after that stunt he pulled in the dormitory. And even with his insanity, he shows care and worry for Toshiro after he realizes just how much danger he's probably putting him in. Black and Ukitake's relationship was pretty funny too. Those two were complete dorks and I loved it.

And we can't forget about his friendship with Neville and Luna. Their friendship was so wholesome and sweet that you almost gave me cavities.

Thank you so much for writing this story and giving me the chance to experience it. This was one crazy ride and one that I would gladly go on

This went really dark REALLY fast.

i'm sad that this story ended ,but at least it was really to read.

Perhaps this is the worst fanfic about Toshiro.

HOly shit this is dark! I don't mind though, i just want the potter gang to stop alienating him!

Harry liked seeing Toshiro suffer? What? That's pretty ooc. I can see him being relieved about him being upset because it makes him more approachable and human, but being pleased about his pain? Weird.