I had forgotten how much I enjoyed this story until I started reading it again. I would be thrilled to see it continued someday, but I still really happy that I can read it all. Thanks so much for writing this!

I just the most unbelievably overwhelming *need* to read this story again. I really wish it had been finished. I'd love to see this finished.

It's a shame this story was never completed.

Ahhhhhhhh! I need more! I haven't been able to put this down in my free time and don't want it end here. Please tell me you have the rest somewhere.

This story is amazing! Its so intricate and I love all the twists; its never boring! Even if you don't want to write another 30 chapters at least finish the story with a few more... the suspense is killing me! Such a great story shouldn't go to waste! Finish it, change the names and you can publish this like 50 shades and be a hit in the sic-fi thriller genre!

*cries* I really, really want more of this! You have such a great story going here! Please continue it!

This well-written, densely plotted, nicely paced mystery ends on a cliffhanger in the middle of the third act. I enjoyed reading it, but it desperately needs a rip-roaring finale to resolve the various loose ends. Will the splicing amnesty become law? Why did Heero feel such an intense connection to Duo when they merely touched? What is Gervais’ backstory? Will poor Duo managed to get rescued from his plight? I hope you will find the time to finish this—it would certainly be worthwhile.

I can't believe this is where you ended! This is a fantastic story. All the characters are in character, the plot is exciting and mysterious and the writing and grammar is good too! Do you plan on continuing the story or did you just abandon it? I really do hope you update!

Can't wait for part 2

Poor kitten, can't catch a break. he'll be scarred for life.

lol ppl having sex down the hall. Every but him is getting some

I like the line about Chase's neck snapping. Very vivid.

Damn near had a heart attack when Nellie came back with Kitten in her arms. That boy gets into some issues without trying.

Two things: Sadness with that there's no sex between Duo and Heero yet, and lol on Kitten saying the woman smelled like fish!

I like Nellie boy, she a badass!