This is so good!

Each of these chapters were pain, pain, and more pain, and I'm so glad that there is a resolving one at the end! This was amazing!

"...liked and trusted by those in the community. ...whole without scars." That killed me. Congratulations.

Really loved this, though I do hate that Anakin was seemingly forgiven at the end of Return of the Jedi despite decades of evil actions. Not your fault, I know you were just following what the film showed everyone.

This is very well written, especially the symmetrical structure of the first three chapters with Anakin's and Owen's opposing viewpoints. It's completely believable that each of them would feel that way, even if it kind of made me want to knock their heads together :) But at last in the afterlife they were able to reconcile and start over.

Very sweet and meaningful

This is so beautiful and heartbreaking. A truly interesting way to look at the situation. I applaud your efforts and creativity. Bravo!

UUHGHGHHHHH this has killed me. I didnt realize how much i needed this till now

This is so great omg

I love how utterly stupid and realistically biased their perceptions are when it comes to each other. Despite only meeting once, the sibling rivalry burns bright within them.

This was so heartwarming. I absolutely loved it!

very good story thank you

This is amazing! It just goes to show that what you think of yourself and what you think others think of you may not be right at all. :) You really got into the heads of the characters, very realistic. I'm glad Anakin and Owen worked things out in the end. Bravo!

:)

Perfect.