Too good, sweet in all the right spots.

I like how Riku accepts that Sora is there for him, no matter what. Brilliantly written, they're both in perfect character.

-does a little dance- You have no idea how much I need that fluff. It make me feel all warm and fuzzy now. I love the portrayal of their early friendship. It seems exactly like it would be like that. And I love how you went back to the bottle-into-the-sea-thing.

Hello there!

You are wonderful, this is EXACTLY what I needed/wanted. I love your writing style to pieces and the fact that your wrote a Sora/Riku "cannon" one-shot just makes me gush. You are amazing and wonderful and just, thank you. Thank you so much.

Also your characterization was superb, I though you ought to know.

Are you wondering how you got a after so long? I actually searched the word "hold" in the kingdom hearts category and this poped up and with a summary like yours "Hold still, let me internalize you." who could resist?

Jeez you write such amazing stories. I'm tearing right now. Not sure if it's the fact that I wore my contacts too long, or because of the awesomeness of this story. I like to think it's the latter.

Either way, for me, this was one of those fics where you finish reading and you just let out this huge breath that you didn't know you were holding in.

I...I have to fav it...

dfgsdfgsdgf oh my god this was so sweet and tugged at my heart in all the best little ways. I'm just sitting, staring at the ending and smiling goofily now, because it was just that cute and I loved Riku and Sora (holy crap you nailed who he was on the head more perfectly than I might have ever seen), and you are so awesome and thank you for writing the pick-up of my day. :) :)

Aw!

Because there were too many things wrong in the deep places in Riku’s soul for him to ever, ever want Sora to look up to him.

I think that basically sums up Riku's entire character.

This was stunning, the imagery, both of their characterization, and you basically managed to squeeze the essence of the KH-epic and the beauty of RikuSora into a small piece like this.

That was so very great!

The reminiscence of their childhood until today all mixed with Riku's thoughts, that was very well orchestrated (don't know if the word is correct here :x)

I really like it, really really like it

Aw! Really nice ending :D Nice idea, too. There are many variations of the "Write it down, let it go" idea you used, and I like how this one fit so well~

Fav ) Good job.

aw cute! ne did sora kiss riku back?

Oh silly Riku and his depressive thoughts. Good thing he has his Sora. -laughs- Good job, I'm in total need of fluff. Keep it up.

-pause- Wow. I adore this story. Everything about it just kind of clicked to me. I liked the bit of Sora's and Riku's childhood you showed. Also, the way you potrayed Riku was done so well. Lovely story! Keep writing!

woah~! changed ~ *is awed* aw~ haahah i descripton of them when they were little~ soraandriku~ heheheh...AHAHAHAH i love Sora~! he but that kid woo hoo~! o the description of the sunset~...HAHAHA the fruit juuice part w really wish i had taken that

AW

thats so sweet! I love it, very cute and fluffy! good job