| Reviews for Cause and Effect |
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Aerin Skyfeather chapter 35 . 10/14/2010 Loved it! I think its amazing how you manage to build up the characters personalities so much without having to use very much detail. I really would have liked to see more Saku x Sai though... Excellent work and I'll probably start on the next one tomorrow. |
LaClem chapter 35 . 3/18/2009 Gah! It's over :( What a great story, I hope that you'll pick it for the next school year. This was simply an amazing story, with the character development and relationship building. Each chapter had a new exciting twist to it. Just a great fic, thanks for writing it. |
Drachenzahn chapter 35 . 3/17/2009 Well I just spent several days reading both stories and loved every page! Great work on composing the entire story as well as capturing so many aspects of life. You blended all the naruto characters so well, and I love the shino/tenten pairing. Thank you so very much for sharing (posting) your work! |
BLADEILLEGAL chapter 35 . 3/16/2009 I love the ending!:) |
LaClem chapter 2 . 3/16/2009 This is really funny so far, I can't wait to read the rest of the fic! :) |
BLACK-OP1 chapter 32 . 3/9/2009 dude. DUDE! things just got real. Hinata just dropped a serious bomb. This is a great story, and its a crying shame you aren't getting more praise for it. This and the prequal are simply amazing. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
Fearoffallacy chapter 26 . 2/19/2009 Yeah, I kind of feel like a stalker because I just reviewed your other story... cause and effect.. so yeah. It's just because I am on a review spree today. This is one of my favorite stories. Seriously. I even printed it out once, but I lost it... darn. I love how you write Sai, so akward and well-meaning and... the way he talks, I can just see it. He makes me laugh so hard. And Sakura is very good too. And while the ending felt a little forced with leaving for such a long time and then its all ok... its still great. I think one of the best things about this story is its very touching and deep. I didn't feel like I was reading fanfiction. |
Fearoffallacy chapter 26 . 2/19/2009 This was such a cute chapter! Shino's so funny- "She slept with Kiba?" omg. I feel for Shino, but even more so for Temari! Poor girl, always busting her butt for others, but all alone... I hope she finds someone. And.. the sex scene with naruto and sasuke was great... but I kind of wish you showed them doing more couple things, like talking/flirting/out on dates, day to day stuff, instead of just constant drama or sex.. cause its kind of like, sasuke does all these bad things, but besides sex he does nothing to redeem himself... like, a situation in which he gets to be the good guy for once! because Naruto being so forgiving is a little extreme, and while its very Naruto, and he really love Sasuke, I want to see more of why he loves him, you know? And I want to see some of naruto's faults! Yeah! Look at me, "I want I want"... who is the reader to demand anytihng?. That said, I like your relationships with real problems... yeah.. how everything is so cause and effect lol I LOVE HOW MUCH YOU UPDATE! Yay! Thank you and I love your story. |
DarlingandDarlinger chapter 24 . 2/11/2009 Dang this story is like a soap opera... no one can ever do the right thing... drama drama. Please say that Naruto and Sasuke stay happy. Please. Anyways... good job! I really like your stories, especially study of the heart. |
BLADEILLEGAL chapter 1 . 12/11/2008 cool, like it already |
Strife3 chapter 14 . 12/1/2008 Ino's suffering from post natal depression? :( Anyway, great chapter. Shika will be a great dad. Sorry about Temari. :( |
jade chapter 2 . 11/9/2008 Okay, I just choked to death on root beer. Condoms Suck Lewis. I'm going to remember that forever. |
Strife3 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008 You sure work fast! I almost feel sorry for Sai's mother. Almost. :) Thanks for the new story/chapter! |