IT WAS AMAZING! I honestly didn't think I could fan girl so hard over a thousand-year-old book fanfic, but I did. Btw, I did read the other one you wrote when pony and johnny got together, and when they kissed for the first time I was practically screaming. It's 1:20 AM btw. But the only thing that pushed me was the ending. Just... just why..? Why break our hearts? Well, it was great overall, I loved it so much!

Plz update! It's really good!

OMG this is so good I hope you still make more and more I want Johnny to see pony again and that could be a happy family again

Are you going to continue the story if so can you share it please I love them all

WHAT! WHYYYYYY

It was a great story but the endin was terrible. I'm sorry to say that but honsetly.

That wasn't even an ending. There were way too many loose ends for it to be anywhere close to an ending. That was more of like the rising action or climax . There was no conclusion. So therefore noending.

WHAT!

See, now, that's just me of you to do to them.

Stay Gold

Layla

What happened? You give us all this info to look forward to and cliffhanger us? No fair!

No! Don't kill Johnny! They're so close.

~LOVED IT Johnny and pony so cute~ and adding kids awww~ BUT IT CANT END LIKE THIS ARE JOHNNY AND PONY GONNA BE REUNITED PLEASE SAY YES~ JOHNNY CANT LEAVE PONY~ AND WHAT ABOUT DIXIE?~

THATS IT? there has to be another chapter,, you cant just end it right there! please continue!

what the duce? what just happened? did... did you really just end it there, like that? at least make one final chapter, at least telling what the hell happened!

plz continue this. it can't end this way. plz all your reviewers beg you most likely