A perfect Allen x Lavi done correctly! Thank you! I'm more of an Alvi and so this story was a perfect fit and romantic!

D'awww... :D

You are amazing! No spelling mistakes or errors of any kind (those drive me nuts), and the story was completely nosebleed-worthy

I love the last part, it is so cute!

I really really liked this ! :D

I LOVE IT! Your a really good write. You should keep it up!

How to put this... That... Was... So... CUTE! I loved it! Great job!

I liked that good job

it's funny how allen is so naive sometimes XD

Just wanted to say that I thought this story was beautiful!

Long and amazing!

Hot damn.

Words can't describe how much I like this. It seems that sometimes random fanfic picking actually works! I like the way this one flows and how you've gotten Allen's thoughts down pretty accurately considering the situation. ...Well, as IC as any canonically straight male character can be in smut fic, but eh. What I mean that he isn't acting like a girl with male parts here and that's awesome. Just being his own naïve workaholic self. ;; I feel kinda bad for Lavi. Then again there's number of possibilities laying for them in the future keeping eye on the ending. First task is *~The Morning After~*. oh and much love for the twist at the end, as Allen topping is such a rare thing. ;;

Great job, keep it up D

Hehe~ X3

Now every night is gonna be sleepless.. filled with other activities.. ;D

Aw, wow, I loved it. So cute.

With all the "back then"s and "at the times"s and such I thought it would end in a sad way, but it didn't, it just stopped there, and I was so happy. It was so cute. xD

Much love for Allen's characterization. It was awesome, throughout the whole thing. He was very easy to relate to as the whole thing evolved.

God, so cute. so well written. definitely going to add this to my faves list~

~Silence