Amazing! Hope to see more. You did a great Job with this it is really good!

Your story is quite fascinating if I do say so myself. And your writing is also brilliant, delighted to read the rest of the story

Oh yes... because he can totally be everywhere at once. I mean, he's the fucking potions master, he likely has potions brewing that he needs to keep an eye on too. This Harry is such a little bitch.

Riiiight... because the chances of their child not having magic is soooo high.. I'm totally not understanding what he needs to protect her from anymore. She's already married and pregnant.

Yay! Cliche forced drama!

Yeah... Trillions... Because fuck how economy actually works.

Wow... this is just stupid... "You control the minister, but you can't do anything about it". Don't you think this is something that should have been brought up like as soon as the stupid ass law was dropped? Talk about forced fucking plot.

Then his grandparents are still alive. So they just said "fuck our grandson!"? Why the hell would he want anything to do with them? I sure as shit wouldn't.

I like the like the story so far, you portray Harry well.

Ok seriously I’ve been reading this story...Harry had said he would expell Ron and Ginny if they tried anything against Hermione but when they do he just wants to keep “watching” them. Step up and do something Harry.

U should continue the story with Harry and the rest of them. What happens if ginny and ron get out? Do they get out? Will they continue on with their plan? Will their family disown them? So many questions plz continue with this

Good plot in theory, but you could have used a beta to make it better

Why did Neville and Lavender break up?

Wasn't Dean Thomas in Harry's year at Hogwarts or is this a different Dean Thomas?

Why is every fucking guy touching Hermione . This is so fucking gross because your other stories have Hermione together with older man so it’s actually disgusting when you have Remus more touchy with her than Harry .
-She wrapped her arms around his neck. “I love you too, Daddy”
Like wtf is this crap ?
Then she hugs Sirius “Sirius wraps his arms around Hermione and tucks a bit of hair behind her ear”
Stop with this. Borderline cheating . Any sane boyfriend would NOT allow that at all. The fact that you had Ron point out “you sleeping with Remus too Hermione” just proves how you keep teasing that ship and it’s super fucking disgusting .

... Ouch... the cringe gave me a stitch in my side.. Gonna pass on this one.