I did not wish to see Yoshimitsu's Death, but this has been written very beautifully, and I loved the way you made Yoshimitsu - I do not see it as out of character; afterall, for him to be a leader, I can easily see Yoshimitsu being that fatherly, and calm.

I very much loved this story, and Taka was quite admirable himself, as well. Very beautifully written story. I love it.

~Pris

Hey ho. Glad to see more stuff by you, and this is awesome. Yoshimitsu is portrayed brilliantly here. It's left me begging for more. Thumbs up to you.

AWESOME!

Thanks to you, I actually like Yoshi in here! Although I kinda like it when he's all hyper and stuff change is always good. I've always thought of Yoshi as pretty bland compared to Kunimitsu but you've given him some real depth here which the story all the more touching. Nice work!

I'd say more but I'm so tired (5.33pm, I know, stfu Razer, you don't stay up until 8am for me lulzbagah), but regardless this was a really nice piece. I'm glad you got something out, at least -drums fingers together, still awaiting 'Web'-

Good to see a new Yoshimitsu fic as well. Been missing them, lol. The 'it knows' bit with the sword near the end was brilliant as well. And this is one of the few, if not only times I've seen you write in THIRD PERSON and in PAST TENSE. -shifty eyes- Bwahahahahaha.

Keep it up, mirukusheeki!