Well written! I kept reading chapter after chapter to see what would happen next!

Well I have to say I've never read something this good in fan fiction. Well done. There are several things i wanted to say. First the plot was well thought out. You knew where you wanted to go, that is a trademark of good authors. Your use of words was very broad making the story that much more captivating.
Several suggestions:
1. You spent to much time on Malon since the issue wasn't resolved. If Ricky had fallen in love with her, that would have made it worth while, but since that wasn't resolved, you shouldn't even mentioned her after Link told her he was dating Zelda.
2. Zelda spent to much time as a warrior and not enough as a princess. I'm not saying make her helpless, just put a little more Princess Peach into her next time:)

Love the relationship between Link and Zelda. It's disappointing that this part is over. Anyway, sentiment behind us, the writing is good but the parts are too short. As I said earlier, try combining two parts into one. You have great talent. I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

Iv'e been into Mario games since I was 8. Some of my roommates encouraged me to start playing Zelda also. I started with the 1986 NES version. My second game was Ocarina of Time 3D. I personally enjoy Mario more, but I think the Zelda stories have better potential. I mean, Other than Rosalina's Storybook, Mario World doesn't have any unique storylines.

Absolutely LOVED how you used such an unfamiliar quote from an unfamiliar character like Jolee. KOTOR is the best RPG game EVER. Now about the story. Very professional writing style. It is obvious you have played and studied the games thuroughly. I know a fellow gamer when I see their work. I felt that it was missing some descriptive details, a problem easily fixed by adding more adjectives. I suggest you combine some of the parts to make each section a little longer.

Love love love! Thank you so much! It was amazing!

I know my review doesn't matter at this point, but I don't really give a crap. I'm gonna answer your question.

I was three years old when Skyward Sword came out. At the time I had no idea LoZ was even a thing. I never played video games. But one day, when I was five, my dad said he wanted to show me something. It was Skyward Sword! After watching him play for a few minutes, I decided I wanted to be Zelda when I grew up. I know, I know, I was stupid. But you do stupid things when it comes to LoZ, no?

So that's mah story. Great chapter, I love how this is turning out, even though I've already read thus like 5 times but yeah. It's good all the same.

From,
A random person many years after this was finished - 2019

I said it before, I'll say it againI love your zelda!

holy crap Zelda just went nova. I love it!

Ooh

have you ever thought about writing a sequel were they have a family and stuff? I know a lot of people would like to see that

Touchstone is the father, isn't he?
So help me if I'm right...

What the actual hell, writer. Threats of rape or the acts of such in a story for purposes only for shock value contribute nothing to the story. You're only trying to shock the viewer. It's hard to believe this is even Legend of Zelda. Christ. This website.

Jesus Christ. This is probably one of the most inconsistent stories I've read on this site. Zelda is just really unlikable. Like, I get I'm supposed to feel sorry for her for the cliche of "Oh I have to marry a prince and I don't love him.", but that just doesn't make her more likable. Link barely does anything in the story except just something for Zelda to "fight" for. Impa is the only likable one. Touchstone is a dick just cause. Maxi and the wolf king or whatever are pointless. The prince is a cliche obstacle. Also, Zelda states that she can't run from Hyrule with Link because she "Cares about her people.", but if she cares about her people and her spot to rise to power and make Hyrule better, why the hell does she neglect her own duties and completely ignore her studying and all that crap? She literally contradicts herself. And if Link was the mature hero he's supposed to be, he should be the one encouraging Zelda to do all her stuff. And yeah, I know it's for plot significance for Link to live with Zelda in the castle, but how does it make sense in the first place for it to be allowed if the king is so strict with Zelda? Also, I'm positive the only reason the writer has Zelda and Link dislike Malon is probably because he dislikes anything that has to do with Malon and Link. Also, if they dislike her, why should they care if she's ignoring them? They got their peace from her, right? Oh, wait, no, because there needs to be more forced drama. Well. This is a fanfiction after all, so what do you expect?

Wow, honestly this could be a book. I really enjoyed reading this and it was an amazing story. Thank so much for this story, other zelink dont have a progressive story so you have done justice. If you want to reply email , also you proably might not see this since its 2019, nine years in the future to 2010 you.