Good story. All I have to say is WOW, just WOW

WHY

They had sex

wat

Why did you do this?! I'm actually crying! Its not right! I can't breathe! Why...

NOOOO! NOOOO! Please...why are you doing this?! I am bawling my eyes out! Their kids are orphans, Ron got shot and Hermione's inside an INSANE ASYLUM?! Could you not stop to think on how this would effect people?! It's not right...it's just not right...

O.o well... that was great writing, but a very... disturbing...ending

I'm just gonna say, I cried like nothing else when Ron died. Like... I... I... Need him! And... Hermione... Oh, Merlin, please. I know... Ron isn't really dead, Hermione's not really insane, but, I didn't think a fanfiction could emotionally effect me that much! I congratulate you on touching me with your fanfic.

Wooooooow

Sexy time, sexy time, sexy time, nightmares for freakin' EVER. Whhyyyy?! All I wanted was the sex!

oh my god..

that last chapter was just disturbing. the other ones were good. and the beginning of this one was sweet
but now... disturbing and too too sad

I really liked chapter 3...was there actually a reason Hermione had been cutting herself?

That was the best lemon ending ever. And I mean ever. Usually they just say "ILU" and that's the end of it.
Thank you for making it a little... more.
watch?vw8OAnZKGtNU IAMX - I Like Pretending
This was what I listened to. It may not have been perfect, but it was for me.

Wow! Very graphic, but well written. Great job!

Leo Rox!