sweet

awwwwwww! soooo cute! I love it. Although I can't picture Elrond or Thranduil in a flour fight no matter how hard I try.

its actually elladan not eladan

A ten year old is still a child, but a ten year old is definately too old to suck his thumb.

Aw, this is adorable. My favourite line: Sometimes, people really are elflings, children, or little hobbits or little dwarves at heart. You just have to coax it out of some.

I love this line because it's lovely and sums up the theme of the story. very sweet, well done :)

Now that was cute.

And hey, I'm 13 and I still suck my thumb lol, very old habit of mine.

Hope to read more of your work.

~*~Tari,