I love how the ‘all I have to do’ in the first and last chapter mean something completely different. It shows how far they’ve come in there relationship. Love the ending

Wonderful original story, loved how you stayed true to the main characters personalities, I really appreciate that you gave Severus time to sort his head out before coming back to Hermione, after 2 wars and 2 masters he would need space and help... Thought Moody was a great mentor of sorts to Severus, simular in lots of ways. Thank you for sharing your amazing story, really enjoyed it. NJ

"I do not want to startle you, Minerva," he said sarcastically. "But I have not handled events perfectly, perhaps,"

I'm dead that is hilarious

Thank you I loved that it was fun and deep and even silly.

I’m appalled by Hermione’s decision.. To do something like this without his consent is almost like rape for me, a complete violation of his rights and a baby, a life. I’m having trouble processing how she could and how she even thinks she is right.

.word. that was absolutely amazing. it's so different from the norm with it's own super original plot. I loved the added humor, I loved how you portrayed the characters, especially the teacher (and Severus most of all).

The Alastor and Minerva stories are just since unexpected sweet surprise.

excellent.

as Madam Hooch said "eeeew, old people sex" lol

I liked that you made this about Severus and Hermione's relationship more so than The Order and Death Eaters. It's nice having a story where she is not tortured and/or raped in every chapter.

Thank you for sharing.

I absolutely love some of the emotion in this fic. The absolute highlight being Flickwick's confession to Mcgonnagal after shooting Snape in the back. It was masterly written to break me, it felt so real and guilt ridden.
There also felt like there were a couple of missed opportunities for plot and character interactions that were rushed over like the twins death.
Good story, Snape slowly coming to terms with what was hoisted onto him was cool to see as you really got into his way of thinking and portrayed it really well.

This was by far one of the better stories I have read about these two. Really nicely paced, and blessedly free of the usual cliches. Moody and Minerva also make a great couple, and I thought your characterisation for everyone was excellent!

Brilliant story! Thank you so much, it was a refreshing take on everything. Nice to see some of the others getting some action too like Minerva and Flitwick.

FINALLY! lovely ending. it was a little frustrating but it totally makes sense. after everything sev went through i think you were spot on in not rushing the HE. Thanks for such a great story. xo

these battle chapters are amazing! the luxury of reading a long finished work means i can keep plowing through! Your readers must have been losing their shit when this was a wip!