that was an amazing story! you are an extremely talented writer!

Love the story so much!

Is there gonna be a sequel?

I LOVE this story...and at the end of this chapter when Ava said her last line...it totally sounded like a Horatio moment, with him putting on his sunglasses and leaving the set with the theme song blasting...I can totally see it!

Okay, so I was just re-reading this story. And I've decided that you've created such a powerful character in Ava that you could go many different directions. I think that it would be really cool if you wrote a sequel to this story where Ava is dealing with the idea of marriage and leaving behind her more dangerous life because of her love of Don. Just a thought. I think that you wrote all the characters from the show really well. I will be on the lookout for more in the future should your muse cooperate!

I loved this story. Sad to see it end.

what a beautiful ending, i loved this story. can't wait to see u post something else lol.

Another wonderful story from you. I loved the emotions during Ava's last scene with Tony, and you captured Flack's vulnerability so so well. Kudos

I loved the ending. Are you gonna write a third part to this

This was a great ending! I liked the story and I wasn't sure how you were going to end it - Nice way to end it.

oh, what a perfect ending to this wonderful story. I was wrong in saying that you would need 2 or 3 more chapters to wrap this up. :) I'm sad to see this story end, but so satisfied with this ending. It's wonderful. Your talent far surpasses mine, and I hope to hear more wonderful tales from you, like this one. Thank you for sharing this adventure with us. Keep writing.

~Cregga

I am so happy Ava chose Flack! I am doing a happy dance, you should totally write a sequal! I really want to know what will happen with them in the future!Very well written and the ending is amazing!

OH MY! Fantastic ending...the emotion was so raw and amazing and I could really feel it. Great job!

yay! i'm so glad she chose Flack :D very good chapter! i loved it, it was heartwrenching and emotional, but the best chapters always are! great work!

Loved your story! So cute!

So if I chant SEQUEL loud enough, is there any chance it would happen? 'Cause there's a lot of potential with such a great cast of characters and an interesting crossover with CTU.

This was a great story.