"You've tried to kill him?!" Juno asked incredulously.
"Of course. It's my core programming," he said simply.
"Unbelievable. No wonder why he is such a wreck," Juno said.

That was great! LOL! Thanks for writing!

Nice. At first I thought you would just be copying the game word for word but you didn't and it turned out nice. Can't wait to read on.

The feels! :'(

FUCK
feels
You must be a Sith, since you're a master of deception.
It seemed so much like he was going to live
But no.
I haven't checked yet, but if you've done the second game/book, thank Christ.
Because I'm sad now.
Seriously though, utterly fantastic. This story was Top. Followed the story, but was different enough to be refreshing. Juno's POV was new and good too, since it goes with the story, but you get more of an idea of what's in her head and it skips the constant murder of stormtroopers.
Solid.
8 or 9 out of 10. (Never given a 10 yet, haven't found an utterly perfect story yet.)

Posted 9 November 2013, at the Starwarsknights web site and the Lucasforums Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. I was posting directly to the actual story threads, but had problems last year so I was stymied in my attempts to post the reviews. But I have finally caught up.

Set in TFU: Captain Juno Eclipse meets her new commander

The intro section is tightly written, and the stage set well. Having Starkiller complain because of an upgrade doesn't make a lot of sense. He actually sound more like a petulant child whining because his parents moved his stuff around.

But the piece does sound interesting enough to read further.

nice story

Interesting I like your ending.

This was such a great story! A really well-written Juno/Starkiller story, which is pretty hard to find. I hope you write more about them :) Or at least Juno/Starkiller's clone

The way this ended made me sad. :'( but at least it was better than how it really happened in the game... Great story. :)

It's such a great story! One thing that would be awesome to add is Juno seeing the security tapes of starkiller being betrayed by vader. That would show slot of junas character!

This was amazing. There is so much I loved, I don't know where to start.

The ending was sad but beautifully written.

The characterization was great. I love how Starkiller has a perfect blend of bad-ass Sith, playful banter and is still an insecure guy who doesn't know how to talk to girls. Juno was also excellent. It was cool to see what she might have been thinking.

I think my favorite parts were all the filler. Where I got to see then interact, and watch their feelings for each other develop.

I don't know what else to say but I'll end with this. Thank you for writeing such a wonderful story.

wow. Im actually full on crying. I haven't done that since the Romeo and Juliet type twilight fic I read so long ago.

sigh. it's too bad the story's over. but, that's life, things finally become happy and in balance only to be shattered like a Stained Glass window. this was an epic fic. and I normally hate fics that just tell the same story from a different pov, so that really means something.

May The Force Be With You...

I love this story.

But I can't help but wonder...

What about The Force Unleashed 2? It's pretty obivous that Starkiller is alive, unless it's one of those prequel-sequel things...

I am liking this!

awesome story