Just a random thought... When the Senate sent henchmen to take Zero, they acknowledged kaname and Ariya as purebloods, BUT WHAT ABOUT MY FAVOURITE SADIST? Sara Shirabuki?!

I thought it is imouto instead of it itouto.
Imouto: little/younger sister
Itouto:little/younger brother

Where's the sequel? This story was so good and I was excited to read the sequel but it wasn't on your profile. I liked the way you made Ariya have to choose between Kaname and Takuma and also the way you kept them in character. Great story! loved it! :)

0.0 where's the sequel? :/ btw I loved the story! And the side storys you had at the top and bottom were funny! XD

Wow and Cool

I cant stand for this alyour Roman numericals are wrong it should be IX

I totally found your story interesting! I haven't seen the sequel in your profile page, but I do hope you're making it! I found your story interesting and you did a great job with keeping the characters of Vampire Knight with their original personalities. Great spelling, smooth paragraphs, and correct grammar - great job!

So I recently regressed back into my love of Vampire Knight. And older I find I enjoy the pureblood Kaname even more. Thusly I hope he can find happiness with Ariya Kuran while Takuma gets Ariya Yunoki. (2 seperate people so it should work after a million and one twists right) And now... I absolutely loved your story! It kept me so hooked and I cannot wait for the sequel to be up and running. In fact sequel quick else I'll throw a cyber pitchfork at you! You are going on my Author alert list TW! Say hello to your new fan. :)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY? WHY DID U HAVE TO HAVE HER DO THAT?! ( sobbs ) it was so cute!

I hope you got the sequel out soon I love your story so many twists and turns D please send me the link if its already out? I'm looking forward to setting what will happen!

At the end of the chapter you contradicted yourself. You wrote that she hadn't used the crystal since she was nine but several lines later wrote that she used it when she was thirteen and again when she was fifteen. Also, if she had barely used blood tablets and rarely drank blood after the last time she saw a vision of Takuma, wouldn't she have starved? If you meant the last time she saw him in the crystal to be at age nine and she is at least fifteen, that seems a bit unlikely.

Sorry it sounds like I'm flaming you, I just wanted to let you know there were a couple discrepancies.

Your story is quite interesting. There are a few grammatical errors and whatnot here and there, but there aren't so many, so keep it up!

Ichio is Takuma's grandfather. And Obaa-sama is what you'd call your Grandma or Aunt, not your mother. It's 'Okaa-sama'.

In chapter 1, Yunoki's eyes were said to be a silvery light gray, but in chapter 3, they were silvery-gold. What happened to them? You should be consistent with a character's, especially if it isn't one of yours, features and personality.

And Takuma doesn't call him Ichio 'Ichio-sama'. He calls Ichio 'Grandfather'.

Hino-sensei's characters... well, they don't seem like themselves, and how she portrayed them. Try better to keep them in character.

Please tell me that you will be up dateing this story soon! I love it!

single itoutou-chan again

'itoutou' again. please change it to 'imoutou' thank you love the story! XD