Reviews for Dreams of the Mist
angry penguin chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Loling! If Minako can indeed get a quote right, then the end is definitely near. :)
dimonyo-anghel chapter 14 . 3/6/2004
i luv it ! plz write a squel! it was soo kool!
Ledophole chapter 14 . 12/17/2003
I LOVE Lita and it made me so happy to see a fic centered on her. Your story was so well written, I am upset to see that it is finished. PLEASE do write an epilouge. I would LOVE to read it, especially since it didn't end on a fairy tale romance way, though I do hope that eventually they do live together, forever in love.
Suki issunsakihayami chapter 14 . 8/10/2003
many people may be reviewing to have to write an epilouge, but remember this, The second Little Mermaid was never as good as the first and should have been left at the wedding and be done with it.

But as long the epilouge is as good as the rest of the story then it'll be great. Remember it's up to you but whatever you decide, i'll know it'll be great!
Fatal Mars chapter 14 . 8/8/2003
I could not have seen it another way. I kinda knew it would not be a happy ending and I figured that it would end in denial or something close to it like heart break. If you choose to make a seguil it is up to you. I really dont know if I would or would not like to see one. I like the way it ended leaving you to wonder if anything really ever happened. It turned out great, but I really do wonder if Ake did do all he promised. It was a truly inspiring fic and has got me writting the third part to my fic. I thank you for sharing your wonderful work that has truely inspired me as a writter and person. Thank you!
koosei chapter 14 . 8/6/2003
that's so sad! How could you do that to them? PLease have a sequel. I think that would be better than an epilogue.

keep writing!

Ja ne!
jupiterhime chapter 14 . 8/6/2003
Aw! sniffle. I want an epilogue. Tell me this isn't the end. Please. I loved every word of it and I pray you put up an epilogue.
Monou Hakkai chapter 14 . 8/5/2003
Actually where you left it for an ending was appropriate and definitely bitter-sweet. This chapter had a blend of conflict between the Sailor Senshi. There was also pain, sorrow and small hints of romance between Akebono and Makoto. I'm sure Makoto would find it in her heart to accept that Akebono would do well in ruling as king and to see him redeem in some way. Before the Senshi's departure, Makoto's speech to Chouka was amusing. Quite crazy of me to say that but it was true. She pretty much showed she had guts to speak out about what her real duty was as a Sailor Senshi. I was cheering for Mako all the way, man _. And the poem at the end was touching. You know you'll probably be a better Sailorjupiter author than I am very soon *no really ;;*. I hope to see another story from you soon.
Kourui chapter 14 . 8/4/2003
YOU ARE A BEAUTIFUL AURTHOR! ::Smiles wide and content:: I cried, smiled and even frowned but to be truthful I love this story and I love the ending you have done for this chapter. It wasn't all fluffy or full of sorrow but it had enough to have me smiling in the end. You absolutely have talent in the writing field. Do you have any original stories? If you do can you please inform me of how many and where I can find them. If your fanfiction are as good as this I know your original stories will be breath taking. I really enjoyed this! And you had all my attention throughout the story. I can't wait till the next story you write, I will be one of the first reviewers!

Take care!

Dimi
jupluna chapter 14 . 8/4/2003
::cries:: That was so beautiful.

There really are no words to describe how much I love your writing. Its so descriptive, and enchanting, I feel like I become a part of what I'm reading. I hope that you continue to find joy in writing...now and always.

Best luck on your new stories, and good luck in college.

JupLuna
Singe not signed in chapter 14 . 8/4/2003
I love this story and I can't think of a better way to have ended it, though an epilogue would be nice! _ This is such a captivating and well written story that I have to honestly say that I don't know of any others around here that can even compare. The way you are able to blend all of the different elements is just amazing! Anyway, please write an epilogue, if only for the fluff that it'll probably have.
jupiterhime chapter 13 . 7/31/2003
...If I didn't love your stories so much...How could you? Whimper...
koosei chapter 13 . 7/31/2003
WHY?

That's all I have to say.

WHY did you have to let Mkaoto die?
jupluna chapter 13 . 7/29/2003
no death threats for you from me I'm afraid. Not that I was expecting that...but I thought about it...it was more like "you know that would be kinda cool"type a thing. _

I loved this chapter...but poor Makoto..having to sit there and listen to her soulmate kinda go...crazy. ::giggles::
anon chapter 13 . 7/29/2003
gruesome, unexpected, heart wrenching cliff hanger. can't wait for the next chap. please update soon.
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