Honestly,great fic. Thanks

Great!

I honestly wish there was more to this story. I love it. any chance of more?

Wow.. Okay, I promise you, the world isn't like this. I know its like, videogame/anime/FF, but I cannot see Leon/Squall crying, or crying out in pain, begging someone to stop like woah. Honestly. Sure, it hurts, but come on dude. Screaming out in pain? This is Squall Leonhart. Not some rag doll who you use as a crybaby in your sick stories about rape. I understand if their not supposed to be like their character. But this is an in game plot, and this is obviously a terrible, wrong story. Yes, you're an amazing writer. But the story plot is the same as every other of your stories. Rape then babie then submitting Squall. Really? Trust me. This is awful.

loved it!

I liked the concept of this fic. It was a fun to read. There are some interesting ideas, and it's always good to see Sephi win. XD Well, since you have left it here, I will think little Leon's attempt to overthrow Sephiroth will fail. :)

Oh, poor Leon always gets the short end of the stick. Now he gets to play baby maker for Sephiroth in a world of darkness. Fortunately for the next generation, Squall Leonheart does not break that easy- I'm so happy that he pulling strings and manipulating behind the scenes in order to secure a better future for his and the other children.

This seems painful... and really sad...

it was okay although the whole them now have girly bits bothered me sorta.

but one complaint i do have is that sex isn't that painful, especially since you make it sound like he's dripping. even if you don't want it at all, you may feel sick but it doesn't hurt that bad.

XD {immediately FLYING TACKLE-GLOMPS Zack} XD "The Pretty"! OH MY HOLY SWEET GONGAGA, I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE NOW, ZACK! XD (random yet probably-not-needed side note: look at my username to get the joke that I'm vaguely trying to convey here. XD) You have OFFICIALLY given me a new nickname for Squall "Leon" Leonhart! XD {kisses Zack's cheek} I LOVE YOU, BIG BRO-IN-LAW! XD (and there's the joke I mentioned a second ago. XD) ...I think I better get offa ya before my blood-related big bro tries to kill me. XD {gets offa Zack} There ya go, Chocobo-man! {salutes Cloud} Now I'm off to track down Reno and Rude in Port Royal and get in on that 75/25 profit rum thing! XD/{evil smirk as she runs off to find her beloved red-mullet-headed Turk and his bald partner, sending a telepathic message to her big bro}

Telepathic message: Oh! By the way, I won't tell the Puppy why, when the opportune moment arrives, you're begging for the Lion's forgiveness, kay, nii-san! ;D Love ya, Cloud! LATERS! {telepathic message cut off after a happily screamed-at-the-top-of-someone's-lungs "GERONIMO, RENO! BANZAI! YAHAA!" echoing in the distance}

P.S. I REALLY need to stop staying up till 3 A.M. on weekends and holidays! XD/DX

how sad.

wow, that was... interesting o.O (not in a bad way, though )

Wow. That was really dark, but I loved it! Poor Leon. Are you going to do more with this?