That's weird. Earlier I read you describing kyoko with raven hair and now its auburn wuuut?!

i love this! you're a fantastic writer-I hope you pick this up again, if you can! I want to know what happens!

Say great job love your stories as I finished 6:8:12 I began reading your other stories as well all that I've read are awesome but their not done will you be completing them especially this one a long with 6,8,12 I'm totally in love with your writing n no ooc just keep up the great work in this last chapter sho, ren and kyoko, impending doom please continue this as well till it's conclusion I'm excited when reading terrifically written stories so in hoping you continue

Awesome!

Why do you have a habit of leaving your stories incomplete? WHY?WHY?WHY? WHY? T-T

I want to read the rest... :)

Please, please update this story! You're really good!

your story is great, and it's not OOC at all! the only part you could say it's a bit OOC would be when Sho first appeared, admitting being in love with her, something he never really admitted to himself (always saying that it was because she was his property and stuff) but considering that some time has passed, this can be forgived ;)
so keep posting, because you are good at it!

please write more :)

Chapter 7 please?:D Happy 2013!

i thought all the characters aren't OOC. YOU DID A GREAT JOB! please update soon.. I know it's been 2 years but it's worth to continue

Hey, GREAT story and I really can't wait for an update, despite this being such an old story.

I might have already posted a review on this one, but I don't know so here it is:

I love your story, how much time you spend on character thoughts and ever moment makes me smile. Your grammar is generally good; the only issue is you seem to change tenses a lot (i.e. looked vs. looks). Its usually because of a very long sentence you've written, and seemed to have lost control of. While it works, in a way, its a bit confusing for readers.
And with all the time you spend on character thoughts, you seem to lose track of setting and placement. I already have a good internal view of Ren's apartment, because I read the manga, but the point still stand that when moving settings, especially between characters like you did with Sho and Ren, you need to explain where they are, and maybe even throw in why they're there. As an example, I didn't know Sho was in his apartment; I guessed, because of the time of day, but I suggest just giving your readers a little more -

I really, really love your stories, and really hope you can finish them. I know I'm reviewing this story suuuuuuuuper late, and you probably don't even look at this cite anymore, but I just wanted to let you know that there are people out there who love your work and are sincerely waiting for conclusion! -

Good luck and happy word smithing!

I have two things to say thus far.
First: LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE! I'm sooo happy to be reading more Skip Beat stuff, and yours is some of the best to boot, so thank you.
Second: I know you've probably outgrown this, since this was written quite a while ago, but the scene with Lory was really hard to follow, like where they were, how they had tea, where they in the lobby still, or where they in Lory's office? Just scenery descriptions and such.

THANK YOU FOR AMAZING WRITING. I TRULY LOVE YOUR WORK.

Update soon! I like it! And shos jealousy! Heheh nice

I can't believe you don't have more reviews. Seriously, what's wrong with people? I knw you havn't updated in a while but- ah, it may be a lost hope to see a new chapter... Personally I think your fic is brilliant. I hope to read more soon, thanks.