| Reviews for Invisible |
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  mayflower chapter 6 . 1/25/2019 Its a sad chapter when are you going to write the next chapter |
 SerenityxEndymion chapter 6 . 8/29/2017 Please continue. |
| pastelmyg chapter 6 . 10/27/2015 Ohhh... Was that all a plan? Pls tell me it was;! I don't like Dawn being the bitch... Pls tell me that's just a plan... CONTINUE THUS FREALING STORY! ITS ALREADY FREAKING 2015! |
| pastelmyg chapter 2 . 10/27/2015 ... I love Contestshipping (Is that the name for DrewxMay? If I'm wrong pls correct me, don't get mad I'm new to pokemon, nah jk I just didn't watch pokemon) But... Why did you have to let Dawn be the bad guy? I love Pearlshipping |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2015 So sad |
| pichufan107 chapter 1 . 3/14/2015 What happens next? Cause I want to know what happens next so please update |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/18/2015 Please Update |
| ForeverLoyalPenguin chapter 6 . 12/22/2014 This is REALLY good! Please do more! :3 |
| astorii chapter 6 . 11/14/2014 Ugh! Though I already have a lot of stories, I would do anything to read, even writing myself! I don't know why I was crying. I think it's because I've felt this way... My whole life. No one notices me, when they do, it's a five second chat and bye... Lol. See ya and byes! Hope you update after all those years! |
| xBandanaRosesx chapter 6 . 9/27/2014 Please continue! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/29/2014 OK I JUST HAVE 1 THING TO SAY THAT THIS IS THE WORST STORY I HAVE EVER READ COME ON WHAT HAPPENED NEXT PLEASE UPDATE IT AS FAST AS U CAN OH AND MAKE UUUGGHHH:( dawn:( DIE! Dawn IS A NO GOOD SLUT MIDGET LOUSY SON OF A BITCH EXCUSE FOR A COORDINATOR UGH SHE IS THE WORST GIRL IN THE ANIMATED SCENE IN POKEMON I MEAN MAY SHOULD HAVE BEEN THE 1 2 WIN THAT WALLACE CUP UGH I'M GONNA SUE THOSE WRITERS AND MAKE THEM REWRITE THE WHOLE THING |
| Selina Alvi chapter 6 . 8/19/2014 I feel sorry for May and I think Dawn shouldn't kiss Drew cause Drew belongs to May cause he gives her roses which is sweet. Dawn belongs to Paul cause they opposite attract. |
| emeraldgirl355 chapter 6 . 7/27/2014 Ahhhh! Must know what happens next! Please upload the next chapture soon! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/25/2014 Please make more chapters! I love this story and i want to know want happens next please! (insert cute pouty face here) |
| Zilan chapter 1 . 5/29/2014 Nice story |
