i loved this chapter, i loved how you've brought in the round table, i think Guinevere and Arthur are so cute together and they are one of my best pairings in all the stories ive read, i cant wait for another update so please update again soon.

please update soon, the stories great.x

0oh great chapter. :) Wb!

Great chapter! :)

Holy Sh*t! Merlin you have to stop that axe! Run away with the Prince and Princess. Idk where, to the Druids! LOL! Maybe not.

Anyway, great story so far.

love the story.

Glad you haven't forgotten this story ] great chapter, sad story about Guinevere's past, looking forward to the next chapter x

great chapter, please update soon x

i thought it was great i want to read more of the love intrest ( ginny )and what happens .

I really liked this, cant wait to read more ] x

Wow, this is so much better. I will definitely being adding it to my story alert list!

I was interested in this, but gave up trying to read it after the first paragraph. Everytime a new person speaks, start a new line, otherwise it gets too confusing and difficult for the reader to read.

I like the idea and you execute it very well but perhaps think about spacing your speech out as it's quite difficult to read when it's all in one block.

I love your descriptions and you OC's don't seem at all mary sueish :)

Fillers! Lol, I'm not angry just frustrated that i waited this long and its a filler. But its ok because, it brought an introduction to gwen and her dad (They are so cute!) love that little family. xx

It doesn't seem bad, interesting really. I like how you used their dialogue to hint that she has red hair and thus could be that servant girl. There are a few mistakes so be careful and reread your work outloud if it helps to recognise small mistakes eg. 'as he watch one of the girls walk' -watched.

Other than that i think this could turn out qite well and i also like that you kept the characters IN CHARACTER, lol.

Bye x