| Reviews for Embodied, partial |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2014 Simply incredible. THIS is a powerful and memorable fic. Be very proud my friend, you have scarred me with this hauntingly tragic piece of art. Well done. |
 sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 5/2/2014 That was so painfully beautiful. Did the gate take anything besides the obvious stuff? Do you have another installment of this? I'm a twisted person, but I love sort-of-dependent Ed. |
| lambtastic chapter 1 . 3/18/2014 :( So sad. I really hope Al will be able to get Ed's hearing, sight, and limbs back without loosing anything else. Maybe they can just live with what they have left. After all, their both alive and with their bodies. Great story. I really enjoyed reading this even though my heart ached for them. |
| LifeIsABowlOf chapter 1 . 11/20/2013 This was surprisingly sad. It's hard to see Ed so brittle when he's always so strong. |
| YaoiReaderGalor chapter 1 . 2/23/2013 You are an awesome writer! I didn't even realize I was picking out your stories until I recognized your profile picture. You're awesome! |
| Quirk chapter 1 . 11/28/2012 I read the full version on .com, and I must say, it's probably my favorite fanfic, EVER. And I've been reading a while! |
| mabidiso chapter 1 . 12/24/2011 Powerful, sad and scary. And yet Ed is still so beautiful. |
| SoullessElric chapter 1 . 10/9/2011 It's so SAD! I like that. :) I keep bringing this story up to my friends cuz it's such a cool idea! Great job, even if it is rated M. |
| Thrice the Double U chapter 1 . 7/27/2010 I'm really intrigued by this story. I hope to see more. One question: How come the full verse isn't on ? Just a simple question, not trying to sound like a critic. :) Keep up the good work. |
| anf600 chapter 1 . 10/24/2009 oh - this is interesting - where is the rest of this story? Please let me know as I'd like to read the rest of it. |
| Hhfcbhf chapter 1 . 8/25/2009 I read the full version on your profile - i loved it! the way you portray it fantastic. i'm not usually a big fan of elricest but i really liked your version. Could you please add more? |
| I Am Miranda Of The Tempest chapter 1 . 5/29/2009 Amazing. Simply amazing...! |
| Officially.Relocated chapter 1 . 4/17/2009 THis is so sweet! Very well written and great idea too. I havn't found many stories so far ending with Ed losing more of his body for getting Al's body back. Lovely writting too! Good xD |
| Vampy chapter 1 . 1/6/2009 Couldn't find the full version. But this story is awesome. And I hope you will continue with it! ;) V. |
| RedWingedPrince chapter 1 . 11/29/2008 *tears up* Aw...it was so sweet...and sad...*blows nose* Would you please consider writing more? ~Artemis |
