Plz try to write something that is not so vague your plot is nice but if you can make it a little more elaborate then it will make a little more sense

please continue * I love it *

ho0ola se ve muy bien tu historia ... es diferente pero creo que puedes lograr mucho conlo que estas escribiendo felicidades

oh..please dont/..

like it..!promise.!

the plot itself was good..

so it doesn't suck.!

please continue this story..

please.!

I want this story to be a NatsuMikan! I don't know what's happening to me but whenenever the story is not NatsuMikan I go berserk...

I love this story please continue!

-_-CrimsonCinnamon Eyes-_-

please don't delete your story. it's really good. and i kinda like it. please continue to update. :)

I love your fic.. don't delete it.. please..

It's awesome.. its alright to have writer's block

just look for things that can inspire you

and write to your heart's content

I/we can wait..

So don't just say that you'll stop..

Ask some of your friends

or the readers to give

suggestions and the likes..

This is your first fanfic so

write's block is normal..

In fanfiction even if we

write cheesy chapters

or obvious endings its alright

because in fanfiction

everyone has equal rights..

Even if there are people who give

comments such as: your grammars are wrong,

your english sucks, your plot is hard to understand

your story should go to trash (this is PURE example)

its either they are bored with their lives or

they just write what pops in into their minds.

But there are people who give reviews that shows

your mistakes and/or want to give comments, those

people just want to help...

And most of us write "comments and criticism accepted"

so we should expect those things..

But your case is different, for your fic

is accepted by a massive number of people..

And there are also a massive number of people

who wants you to continue.. I/we are

ready to help and share our ideas,

So please.. do not stop.. or else

THERE WILL ALSO BE A MASSIVE NUMBER OF PEOPLE THAT WILL LOATHE YOU! (this is, by the way, a compliment)

m3laNie

i love the story!

please continue the story!don't delete it please!

anyways,thanks and more power!

tc 2 all!

-dalayb-

hi!

want you to know that i really adore your fic it's nice.

can't wait next

please update soon!

please

please

please

thanks!1

hmm...

*sighs* i hope mikan ends up with natsume.

have nothing against kyo. just a bit of a natsumikan lover, that's why. _

ganbare masu, gabyrendon!

~windlady

Nice cliffie :3...I hope you update soon, i'm loving your story rite now -

well, im not familar with this story but you seem to have good writing skillz! thank you for reading my stories and reviewing (:D

lol very interesting indeed plz update soon

Nice story!

hi i really love the story i will wait for the next chapter:D