This is so cute omg

Oh, man. I was sobbing reading this. Poor Mark! :'(

Wonderful story, beautifully written. Great job!

That was awesome! I was all like "aww" when they were having their sentimental conversation, and then the thought of Rog/Marc having a pillow fight is just really funny to me.

I loved it, you definitely get these characters.

Aw, this was pretty good! I think people already know what the characters' fears are from listening to 'Halloween' and 'Goodbye Love' (aside from the thunderstorms, nice touch), but I like the way you wrote about it. Good job!