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I promised I'd review this one so let's begin. I must admit that Snow Day is in my opinion one of the most well-written, emotional CSI NY episodes (I also like All Access). I really loved this because this is the first true introduction of Adam as a person of the team. He was, before this just a guy who made jokes and was a little vulnerable at times.

Although, I'm not very partial to second person I really did like this. The emotional turmoil that only could be explained in this viewpoint was very well written. Adjectives that I know but would never think of using really set the scene. Nice vivid Imagery. I like how you went outside the lines and made a believable timeline of the events before Danny's arrival.

I particularly like how it is addressed on how Adam was treated. You can imagine my frustration when everyone was looking over Danny and here I was saying "Hello, did anyone see Adam's injuries?" I really like how Flack was his regular quick acting self and you were able to convey that in one sentence.

So overall it was a deliciously angsty piece. I love it to death and wish that the Adam Ross section had more Adam Centric fics that focused on him emotionally with the team. I'm starting to get aggravated that the only fics in the Adam section are either very poorly written or with some Mary-sue type character that makes you want to strangle yourself. That and the Adam/Stella fics. That got old when it first reared its head on TV.

I plead with you to write more Fics for Adam so hopefully the Adam section will have a higher standard. I've been writing quite a few and only posted some. None are at this level of writing but it's better than the crap that's been posted lately.

Thanks for the read,

Kristine

I like this alot. Almost an Adam's point of view on the episode. Good job!

I'm also clueless on where the accents come from XD. Great Adam piece! Great how a relatioship was made between his childhood and what was happening now. Everything was well portrayed and amazing! :]

Fantastic work. We usually get this written from Danny or Lindsay's POV, and to see it from Adam' - and so well written as well - it's a treat.

Thank you.

C

good story! i don't see many Adam stories, and i think he's a cool character.

Great story, very descriptive. Adam was written very well. A different approach, it's the second person isn't it? Yes, by the way, you're right about the Belfast accents, well Belfast or North East of Ireland if you want to be very general. :D