Story that was going nowhere fast.

Wonderful story, although Hermione is really starting to tick me off but that just shows how good this story is. You're writing a real story about what it truly means to be in love, in relationships some people have their doubts, their insecurities or maybe even a belief that someone else may be the one they truly want to be with. You have excellently portrayed all of these and a hell of a lot more.

Ginny is the unfortunate one in this tale and I only hope she can find love one way or another and the patience she is showing Hermione is something truly commendable. For some reason even though Ron has done nothing wrong i still hate him, perhaps because I have never viewed as a likable character, but that's just my irrational side speaking.

Hermione does annoy me slightly, she seems to be flip flopping between anyone she finds handsome. And for a woman whose unsure about her feelings you are bang on the money, a woman who is uncertain about her feelings, or even orientation, will think things like this and you have done a remarkable job in examining these sorts of things.

This was a fantastic read and apologizes for the long winded and perhaps convoluted review but it's been a while since I have admired a Fan Fic story this much.

All the best and I can't wait for the next chapter

:)

Okay I'll start by saying I do actually like this story, but I do have a few criticisms/points I want to make.

Firstly in the description you have managed to misspell "Christmas" with an extra 's' - minor but it would put off a few potential readers. Also despite having beta readers you still manage to make a few grammar errors - namely in chapter titles and one instance in chapter 5 where you use the number '4' instead of the word 'four' in the context of how many people are there. Again, a minor point I know.

In chapter 1 you have Ginny profess her love for Harry yet a few lines later have her suddenly kiss Hermione for no given reason. This is followed up in chapter 2 with Ginny "slowly" losing her previous feelings in less than a day - not exactly realistic. The girls' relationship then seems to speed up despite their 'confusion' over chapters 2 and 3 with them moving from kissing to sleeping together in a bed. My own personal experiences of coping with my sexuality and hearing the accounts of my friends have led me to believe that moving so quickly is highly unrealistic, but granted I am only going from my experiences.

Despite what I've pointed out, I want to see what happens and hope you update soon.

Andy

ive read these last four chapters and they are really good. Please continue writing. i love femmeslash :) Especially when it is Ginny and Hermione. please write some more. I cant wait for some more chapters. :)

Good chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

I've enjoyed it so far! Can't wait for the update

Dear, you should not thank me at all, you should thank yourself! If you didn't write this well, I would have never started reading stories like this at all!

And on to the story now: it is just amazing! The way their relationship steadily grows, the very recognizable fears they're confronted with, and the love they feel for one another... You make it so real, as if you're part of the story. And I see a lot of myself in both Ginny and Hermione, which makes it interesting, of course. I hope you'll write many more chapters, because I really, truely love this story!

Angel From Above Is Here,

X.

I REALLY ENJOY THIS STORY. I LIKE HERMIONE AND GINNY TOGETHER. I HOPE HERMIONE DOESN'T END UP HURTING GINNY WITH THESE SLIGHT FEELINGS FOR RON. UPDATE SOON.

I know I already said this, but you have really converted me from believing this could never work to ab-so-lu-te-ly loving this!

The way they slowly work out what they want, need and desire, is beautiful to read! Keep up the good work!

Angel From Above Is Here,

X

Great start, can't wait to read more.

Good Job.

It's great so far! Can't wait to read more!

thank you

waiting for more

I like it, update soon

it was good. Can't wait for the next one

wow i ddnt think this was being continued. glad it is i'm putting it back on my alert list right now