Cute story. Modern day AU's are great. Hope you write more!

SHIKATEM IS THE BEST! AWESOME SAUCE!

Oh my! So HOT! and not OCC at all (my opinion) good job!

I want you to know that this is my first comment I've made on this site although I've been reading fanfiction on here for over five years. I thought this one-shot was perfect and I wanted you to know that. Trust me when I say that it's hard for a story to impress me. This one kept my interest the whole time. I love the way you played the plot out; It was very natural and in-character in my opinion. Great job!

Great fic! I love it so much! Is there going to be another chapter! Oh please let there be!

i love it, so adorable :)

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Aw, Shika-kun was cwying? Lol! I loved it, it was niccee...gave me the tummy-flip thingy! _

Very cute and clever.

Nicely done!

That was outstanding! The last part was most amazing - with almost palmable tense and well-described emotions.

Loved it.

really good idea! i loved the ending line too.. it really fit the halloween spirit XD

I loved the fic title so I read your fic, and I loved it too.

Definitely a fav

Oh that was so freakin awesome. I wov it very much. This maked me squeal and giggle with delite. You are a very good writer, by the way. I have always loved this couple but now i love it even more. Thanks.

nice!I liked their characters so much!:)Happy Halloween

holy crap.. holy crap, holy crap that was good! O.O

2 stars my friend, 2 stars! (my profile) * *

I wanna hear more from you in the future!

Tessen in the Sand,

This was well-written; loved how the events all played according to Temari's plan, and that Shikamaru himself, though he did figure out what Temari was trying to get at, allowed her to go on with her plan anyway. Loved how you contrasted his abilities with his hesitance about kissing. Guess Temari did the planning for them both!

Characters were all well in character, and nice associations with Halloween; the concept was well-woven into the story.

Nice work with this fanfiction.