lol videl hissing saying to sayianman while on the floor rolling in laughter i can t believe that my sayianman would pick your name as the name of your costume you are going to wear to erasa s hook up party i love you son gohan

Great story. You write really well. I’d love to see you do something longer at some point.

Great fic. Should really NOT be labeled as Horror though, as it is very misleading.

Wouldn't it be Mrs. Videl Son or Son Videl-san

Inspiration can indeed come from anywhere, what a true statement!

I liked this ending a lot! Gohan and Videl involved in a heated makeout session is intense. I like Gohan almost losing her virginity to Videl in a pantry closet like that, and the way you ended it with Videl leaving abruptly like that was perfect.

Gohan getting Angela and Videl getting Sharpner is fitting but disappointing. I was hoping Videl would just be herself and they'd get paired up that way. That said, them hiding in the same spot then kissing one another works just as well.

MVS, this is a tremendous, ridiculously amazing story! Great job!

I thoroughly, thoroughly enjoyed this first chapter, MVS! It was brilliantly written. The attention to detail with your GhVi romance is wonderful.

I really feel attached to Gohan as a reader and can tag along for his emotional roller coaster with Videl. This is one of my favorite stories of yours, thus far.

Videl's characterization is excellent and spot on, specifically the occasional shy side she has, which unfortunately rarely appears in fanfictions. At least not enough.

Erasa is one of the easier characters to write in my opinion, but you write her a little different from most and give her less of the 'airhead' label and more of an emotional yet sophisticated woman look.

I really like this story, great first chapter!

Interesting curios a little awkard for the ending but was humerous

Nice, it was an interesting fic, easily a come-back-and-read-again type of fic. Making it a Favorite right now.

Great story, .IT!

I'm just a sucker for Videl/Gohan. Nice story!

Haha, I really enjoyed this one. It was cute and funny. _

Ooo, I'm loving this so far!

Cute and amusing.

Well, that's one way to get Gohan and Videl together. _-

lol, awesome! your stories and works are all a great pleasure to read, they just seem to be a bit short. i'd ask for you to try a long term project with gohan/videl, but i'm only reviewing this story. lol, awesome story and i hope to read more of your work in the near future

:)) that's not exactly what i was expecting. the last paragraph where Gohan is explaining what happened had me cracking up.