Wow, this is just horrible. Why would you write this?

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Gaz:"I SHALL MURDER YOU TILL YOU BEG FOR MERCY-"
Gaz, let me take care of this one. *blasts author with fire ball, causeing long and painfull death.

Ahahahahahaha! I love this story! Finally, Gaz gets what she deserves! *evil grin*

Freaky. And awesome!

Nice story. You have a good imagination - or have seen a lot of gory films. Ether way, it is nice to see Gaz being tortured for a change.

o.o

very good. kinda scary. im going to church next week. X_X

but you know, if gaz went to hell, she would party with the demons. she'd rule hell and scare the shit out of satan. no one beats gaz, not even the devil.

Ack! You have a very twisted mind... and I mean that in the best possible way _ I love torture stories, and Gaz really had it coming. Very descriptive and well-written :)

You probably haven't had a review for this one in a while, but leaving it would be an injustice to the story!

This reminded me of the book Dante's Inferno. It's one of my favorite novels. I think paranormal worlds are the most interesting fields to write with, just because we all have different views on what they are, what they contain, and the possibility that they exist. No one ever said hell was a fun place to be, Gaz.

-GCOE

Such a cruel yet deserving fate for Gaz to have.

I pity her though, even though she WAS Evil, she is still one of my favorite characters.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

That _WAS_ rather horrible. (...I mean that in a good way.) It went a bit too quickly toward the middle, with the angel and such (and I cannot help but wrack my brain to figure out if the name "Jonah" has some significant meaning...it is Biblical, and Jonah was kind of merciles...); other than that, though, a pretty cool story. And was the demon supposed to be Senor Diablo from the JtHM/Squee comics? Anyway, good story overall.

Lol, all I could keep thinking about was the song when kenny is going up to heaven in the South Park movie, and PSYCH, he goes to hell.

LITTLE GIRL, YOU'RE GOING TO HELL, YOU'RE GOING TO HELL!

Grabs this like it's the last bus ticket home and faves the living hell out of it... MY KINDA FIC!

How did I miss this? Oh, I know. Your Paragraph Two is the more typical IZ fic in a nutshell, so I'm not here as often as I used to be. Also I don't bother looking under M because it's certain to be full of z dder. I'm sure glad I decided to check out your profile!

If there is a hell, and if anyone in this show is heading there, it's gotta be none other than Gaz. I really wonder why the fandom isn't treated to something like this more often, because come on, it's hardly like she doesn't have it coming. Dib does not take pizza or pop TO annoy her, he's simply hungry or thirsty. She, on the other hand, viciously hogs every morsel and drop of food and drink to herself, and/or beats him up even after he's nice to her in nearly every single fic I've seen her in, and I only wish I could say I'm exaggerating.

Your vivid descriptions of hell would be enough to give an atheist pause, or at least an agnostic. They reminded me of an article I read on the Onion shortly after the original 9-11. This Onion article described the place where the terrorists actually ended up instead of where they thought they would go. "Hijackers Surprised To Find Selves In Hell." It's here if you're interested: w. /content/ node/38673, with no spaces. Or did you already read it? ;-)

i thought that the demon was going to rape her oh well