Love this fic :)!

The smile that crossed my face when I was done readin' this had my sister backing away from me... I love it!

Wow.

Love it! I've always liked stories where Megatron gets what's coming to him from his own side.

Good story

Checkmate? a beautiful, and very fitting name

Wow, that was wonderful. The end felt a little abrupt and I do wish we could have met the sparkling, but I understand. All over a wonderful story. Fantastic work. Keep it up.

Many Thanks,

GT

simply adorable 3 very nice. i have become fond of ScreamerXSoundwave OwO

Nicely told: a slash without the slash, just the, er, consequences. And a lovely way out of an unending war.

This is a good idea, following its sequel. I like how the whole thing ended and was wrapped up nicely, but I feel that this was extremely rushed. For this kind of plotine, especially because it entails the war's end and both factions becoming close to each other, I felt that the length of this piece didn't quite do it justce. There wasn't much character development, and Megatron's death was not as epic as expected. Also, what differenciates good plotlines and great plotlines is conflict, which plays a part in generating tension and suspense, which is what keeps your readers coming back for more.

I just wanted to say Congrads on your stories 'Chains'and

'checkmate' i loved them !

have A Nice Day

WolfFreak

loved chains, loved this :)

oh, sweet ending.

although megs did seem to be taken down incredibly quickly,

i loved it. go, soundwave! woop!

and i absolutely love the name checkmate.

very fitting. xD

Wondeful set of stories.

Cool! I really like what you did with the Seeker's honor code and the ceasefire. Plus the sparkling's name was perfect!