What a great story. Loved it

I loved how you wrote this story. The relationships were strong and true and fun. I love that Bella was able to be part of the pack but not as some weird-secret-love-child. And her as a mountain lion was perfect! I loved the happy ending and just. Everything about this story is truly wonderful.

There's no way that Bella knew about Alice's gift since she wasn't with the Cullens the first time they were in Forks. None of the tribe knew about any gifts, in fact.

good luck

Okay, so I happen to love this story because, what's not to like? The bonding, the idea of the Cullens leading the vampire world, and a bad ass Bella sealed the deal for me. This is the third, or even fourth time that I have reread it. It is wonderfully detailed and well written. Thank you so much!

that was an amazing story! I loved it! XD

It was so good

Great story

This story is brilliant! I find this plot intriguing, engaging, entertaining with wonderful twists and a good balance of drama, fluff and suspense! Well done.

Rereading your story again. Just such a wonderful Tale

Your story was fantastic! I have read many twilight stories and was disappointed because I was running out of really good ones then I found yours and was thrilled couldn't put it down I do hope you write more a sequel to this would be awesome thank you for your work and creativity

Just reread this for the third time! Loved it just as much. Soooooo good

Here a Sample of your Story:
Chapter 1.
then ot rally happened the B ites gotten Worser and suddenly it happened I Went Craziest on a Killing spree then suddenly it happened I was Sick then it causing Father Moon transformed me into the first Shifter/Vampire hybrid and was so Hungry then it really happened noticing a Sign GIVE BLOOD NOW Then suddenly Killled as All of All of them suddenly I was out of Control still Spreading my disease and it caused a lot of as all of each both all of the Sudden I was Gone in a Flash then suddenly was Still Killing and Giving Blod to rebuild then the Newpapers as all of asll of Drained and suddenly went on a Killing training mission then the headlines Screamed NEWBORNS OVERRUNNING IN AS ALL OF FORKS SEATTLE PORT ANGELES AND LA PUSH LED BY A NEWLY-BREED OF WARRIOR MISS ISABELLA SWAN COMMANDS THE SECONDARY NEWBORN ARMY OF AS ALL OF NEWBORNS ALL DRAINED OF BLOOD ARE KILLING MACHINES ARE ON A FRENZY TRAINING HUNT ON THE PROWL IS HISTORY REPEATING AND IS NOW THE OFFICAL NORTHWESTERN VAMPIRE WARS LET EM RIP START HUNTING! Then it really happened it had begun the first Northwestern Vampire wars began at the dead of hight causing the Volturi to summon the Guard Again about us/them but a Witness reported it is a Monstrous army and they Controlled as all the United Stares but a Drug had them dropped as all the rest of the guards Aro we will go to Washington but she and her newborns are her own age but as all of them are Murderers and Killers are unstoppable and unbreakable they all dropped dead forever then it really happened the Senior Volturi guard they wre not pleased Isabella Swan by orders you are with them bitten and by orders your lives will be taken from the humans what crime I broke Death Felix GUARDS BREAKE THEM ALL OF INTO PIECES AND TEAR THEM APART! That our screams wre heard with as all of them suddenly were so brutally beaten to death then suddenly t with the Cullens with five Allies with the Vulcans the erupting but ourselves wre hurt and badly beaten and then Cracked outside then they took them away as all of them Carlislie they are badly beaten far way too much then but covered by as all of blood drained from as all of the bodies by Alpha's Commands Change us and we may be Risen again that it came too late we wre Marked but granted a life saving poison then all of the sudden Erupted freely as a new Species and all of the Seeds into us as all of them violently birthed then it came too late the birth mark changed to a Slayer's mark then crashing with the nomads but it came too soon they taught us to hunt better and gained healing then it really hurts me more lost the ablity to have kids were only Eight kids wre hybrids but it happened could not age anymore Bella are you all right don't ask they killed them and us granted themselves kids then it came too late cracking open then losing our chances to die it was both but the world changed we never died at all but ourselves want Vengeance but it happened the bodies vanished were far too much and many more all of the sudden myself was different with them were different they became Kindred myself was a hybrid others became Intergalactic Lycans with mates and gotten Eight kids and myself was different but lost our lives again afterwards then it happened but the families loved ones and friends noticed how different we became worried of our illness then it went away I became lean Athletic stronger fit and I eat food with blood but could hunt for blood taught the Intergalactic Lycans to eat Animals after draining then it was healthiest way flying skins became one great seamtress a talented on I named as the Earth Children Primal wear I became one tough fashion designer the other coven tried on Senna make more all from Animals we are Converting you granted a drug that never fades the each families were aged but old people ourselves look young and radiant but it happened more we Killed the heaviest drained then it happened dropped freely but losing them to illnesses then buried by cremation the Vulcan way with the bodies all vanishing but releasing much many more but as all of their loyalist guards then too late he got what want his Pieces then it happened I dropped my shield popping with a noise you did great what is it they declare a law all of them have Guards they held a ball but ourselves your eyes are golden yes we can't go to our lands anymore.

Sequel

This is one of the best and well written stories I have read here! THANK YOU