Beautiful just beautiful

that was so frigging cute! that is all i have to say :3

It was brilliant. I could have hoped for a few references from lucky star itself like the haruhi concert and the valentine's chocolate which should have increased her feelings more than the other things. but aside from those poitns it was awesome.

sequal plox

Aww, sweet. I think it's worth continuing.

Good work.

Please continue.

ok that was to cute i mean KAWAII please say you have more

Good job!

this fic is good and cute if you ask me. but i wonder what will happen if Kagami accidentally read it while she was on Konata's house instead of insisting to read it. Oh the tension and the suspense (sorry my mind is getting wild ideas) ah! oh yes great fic again!

All I can say is that was beautiful!

Really good Rapi! You got their personalities down very well, and the atmosphere and just the way the story flowed was really believable. The emotional quality of the story was really great as well. _

Kya! It was cute. Good job! I think Konata was a little out of character but I guess if you were confessing to your true love you would be mighty emotional. I like how you did a story within a story...Keep it up.