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two thumbs up. this story is boss!

Wonderfully and sweet story.I agree with KittyUK the paring was very believeable.

I Toyota Camery how Stephanie Ford F150 Robbie when she Dodge Ram, but I don't Toyota Tercel why he Lincoln Town Car when he could just Volkswagen Beetle!

Other then that I Ford Focus your story.

Have trouble understanding my review? Tough. I replace all verbs with cars. It's just how "I" write, and my artistic license overrules what anyone may think to the contrary.

Have a PT Cruiser day.

Really nice job on the story. Good plot, nice time skips. Good plot is so important. You know, most authors are afraid to do time skips that drastic more than once in a story, and then only if the plot needs speeding up to get to the next "important" part. You skip all over hell just because that's the style. I like it. The only complaint I have is your overall writing. Do you have an editor, or did you do it yourself? I find that whenever I edit my own stuff, I do better at it than anyone else could, since I know what I'm looking for, but this doesn't work for everyone. Reading the story was difficult because of the lack of capitalization. i don't have any complaints grammar-wise, and the paragraphing is your call, not mine. In all, very good plot, not so easy to read. If you need an editor, I'd be happy to lend my services and redo this story for you.

Much love,

Tiff

What can I say? This is so lovely, and in character, and very believable, and all-round charming. At last a Robbie/Stephanie story that ends well for everyone!

Loved it all. You're so cool. What a lovely Christmas present!

Thank you again

K

Wow...

You've added so much since I beta'd this story. I love the dialogue between Robbie and Sportacus, I loved the OC who helps Robbie on the bus...something tells me I'd get on very well with her ;-)...I loved the scenes with Stephanie's parents.

Most of all I love how believable you make this pairing.

This is truly romantic and beautiful, in that special off-beat way that your work always is. What a great Christmas present! Thank you again!

K

All is well over here, I can see. I'm really enjoying watching their relationship evolve. It's well balanced with enough humor and sincerity to keep it from being too mushy and sappy.

Come to think of it, Stephanie's reasoning for falling for the Rotten one kind of makes sense. But I like how he still tries to hang on to his cranky persona.

Anyway, I can't wait to read more and see how this plays out in the end.

Oh and there's NOTHING wrong with "Princess Bride"! Inigo Montoya is my hero.

One last thing. Your story is on standby.

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh!

I love this story even more than when I beta'd it...it's hot and sweet and loving and tender and very, very in character. I also love the transition between her feelings for the Man in Blue and Robbie...very nicely handled and believable.

I never had a crush on Robbie until I got to know you. You've corrupted me. ;-)

Your Christmas story will be going up soon...

K

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Nice start. Can't wait to she where this goes. I really like Robbie and Stephanie, but usually try not to read them together.

Your writing has inspired me to read more.

Continue please. I do love your writing style.

Hi. Hope you don't mind me reading this.

I like it, y'know. It's good. It's REALLY good, in fact. I mean it's sweet, simple and steamy. Very, very steamy. I think it's nice you're giving this particular pairing the happy atmosphere it deserves. Will the ending be as happy, I wonder? Or will it be better? Hmm... Okay, I'm rambling now. I'll just, uhh... I'll just leave. Great stuff so far.

WOW.

Well, you knew in advance I was going to love this because I was lucky enough to beta it, but you've added so much more...

It's hot, and it's sweet, and it's romantic without being nauseating. And I LOVE IT! I especially liked Robbie in drag...he would, wouldn't he?

Robbie/Stephanie is the most challenging pairing for this fandom to write, I think - you've pulled it off fantastically well and they are totally convincing.

Thank you so much, this is such a cool present I can't tell you!

And you know what you're getting for Jol in return, don't you? ;-)

K