Reviews for Where Do I Start? |
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Thisaccontisnowclosed chapter 1 . 11/3/2009 This story is good but it gets a little bit confusing. To make things easier to read I suggest that you start a new paragraph to show you're switching between Sonic and Amy's thoughts. Other than that a good story |
cari la fenix chapter 1 . 10/30/2008 its just so cute, you should do a sequel because its very nice and well done. |
No Line on the Horizon chapter 1 . 10/30/2008 That was a nice fluff story, good way of telling the oneshot. Only teeny concern is the organization, like the first paragraph should be spilt up for each pov. Don't even worry about it though, it was a very sweet story. |