Aww... all the fluffy feelings. The change as described by Helen brings a fresh look at the kids' transformation, and it's fabulous.

Ariel_of_Narnia

oh, i wish u would expand this...

This is so sweet! Though I firmly believe that Lucy would not let Peter put her on his back. Simply because she had been a full grown adult not too long ago and that seems way too childish

Very nice! This seemed to flow - she noted the difference, but it wasn't so much it knocked you over or anything. Definitely worked.

Thanks for writing!

love it

Really excellent story it was cute.

this was a good story it was very cute

This was sweet, Lucy does sound older than 8 in this story; I guess it was her narnian personality. I bet Helen was happy that her son was open to hugs.

this is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account.

great story liked it alot.

Awesome-again!

Beautiful story! I loved your descriptions of each of the Pevensie siblings and the way people around them reacted to their presence. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story!

Great story! I love the subtle changes everyone in the station is able to pick up on. And Ed's hesitation with his mother was so sweet, and so sad. Thanks for sharing this!

Lovelovelove the way you used Helen's POV to describe the changes in the Pevensie kids. Of course they'd changed in Narnia, and brought their developments with them back to Britain-it was a treat to see how other people might react to those changes.

Lovely!

awww...SO cute, great fic!

TheNotedMusician

Again, very beautiful.

In this story I feel like you captured Helen perfectly. The way you did it was brilliant. I wish I could say more but it's... *looks at clock* O.O Nearly two in the morning and my brain is getting foggy.

Off to read the next :) Keep up the good work.

~VFK~