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rosalynthefallenknight chapter 49 . 3/30 I have finished the two of this trilogy and I tried to jump to chapter 49 directly but my attempt turned out to be a failure. haha It's because the ending is like a maze for a reader who skipped every previous plots. |
living42morrow chapter 49 . 8/14/2018 Can someone please explain the ending to me, it got so confusing with all the time traveling. I’ve read over it like 82 times. I love this story so much |
itsjayjman chapter 49 . 5/15/2018 SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD TTTT I ALMOST CRIED DAMNIT |
Nectere chapter 49 . 4/5/2018 Not a bad trilogy. Glad you kept going until the end. Lots of good stories annoyingly get abandoned midway. I think the 2nd book was least interesting: it only seemed to be a series of romantic bf/gf dramas. Unfortunately, I wasn’t a fan of reading about your own characters, like Grace and Alden; they were interesting in the first book but I gradually found their character arc unimportant. I love the humour and witty conversations the characters had, particularly between Tom and Ginny. Ginny’s personality seemed too bold and extroverted; it was almost difficult to read at the start since it was so unlike Rowling’s characterisation of her. It was also unusual seeing Tom so in love with Ginny but I understand that you’ve justified this with the twin birth/dual personality plotline. However, I think one part of Tom that was lacking was his talent/skills/knowledge in magic. He’s supposed to be one of the best students Hogwarts has ever seen. Since your stories are quite lengthy, I can’t pinpoint certain moments where I felt he was under-intelligent, but perhaps he could’ve tried to find out more about his illness or learn more about the soul to find a cure? I was unnerved when Dumbledore confessed to lying and using Ginny at the end: I would’ve thought it’d go against his morals, particularly his wariness of the “Greater Good” ideology. However, I think you justify it well enough. Despite being a fan of The Dark Knight, I think those moments weren’t great. They were just too obvious (being a fan of the Dark Knight) and Dumbledore using Joker’s line was especially cringeworthy. I was a little confused with what happened in the last chapter though. But overall, well done. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2017 Oh yes, this story makes so much sense, because every girl dreams about being with the guy that raped her when she was a girl... No she doesn't that was sarcasm stupid Fangirl |
Eaze chapter 39 . 11/4/2016 Omg... I honestly don't know what to say. I just finished reading this and I'm about to cry it's over. This story is beautiful. You really are amazing writer. I loved Tom in this fic... This was honestly the first story I read, that had Tom ACTUALLY loving her. I read lots of fics and this is DEFINITELY the best I've read so far. Just... UGH. I really feel like crying. I know I'm not good at commenting and I'm not sure if u even go back there sometimes, but I want you to know that I'm going to reread your trilogy 10 times for sure. |
RJLupinFan chapter 15 . 10/30/2016 Omg i can't believe you made him hit her, that is unforgivable. At least the murders weren't actually him... but hitting her was him, not the twin. |
Lilliahna chapter 41 . 10/26/2016 I'm going to cry |
Guest chapter 49 . 7/3/2015 That was kinda depressing but AMAZING |
Guest chapter 10 . 6/30/2015 Oh my GOODNESSSS SHES NOT PREGNANT IS SHE?! |
Guest chapter 49 . 5/9/2015 I simply loved your trilogy. I have read the stories twice and not a day goes by when I don't visit some of my favorite scenes from this fic. I was so scared that the ending would be tragic, I was relieved to find out otherwise. This is one of my favorite Tom Riddle fics. |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/19/2015 I LOVE LUKE TOO! |
Annette chapter 49 . 4/5/2015 Hello I wanna ask you will you write story The Serpent and Siren? |
annette chapter 1 . 11/13/2014 This is amazing ...I love it! |
DragonOwl chapter 49 . 8/26/2014 Wow this is amazing! I loved all of it - it was so powerfully written! I only found the last chapter a little confusing at first, but once I reread it it seemed to make sense (so I think that was just my fault)! Thank you for writing this, as it is absolutely incredible and just so great to read :) I'm sure I will reread it in the future! |